1 The System Arrives REMAKE BB!!!

"..." Lin scrolled down to the comment section of a book he was reading.

"Wow Author san is super talented at writing! Way to go!ツ" Went one.

"Im so exited for next week!" Went another.

"The meanest cliffy...." All sorts of praises were being seen in the comment section. Then, Lin saw his own one.

"Hey Author? Don't you think the villain is too stupid? The protagonist can just waltz in and defeat him with his pinky! Your writing is quite flawed..." Lin's comment was drowned out in the hundreds of other comments, and the ones that did notice his went and criticized him.

"Blah blah blah! Why don't you just write your own story instead of picking on honest good authors! 😒" The replies went.

"As if you could do any better." Another commenter's scoff could be heard through his reply.

There was quite an amount of people yelling at Lin, but he wasn't too phased. Such things would always happen if he tried to tell the author their mistakes.

Lin bit his lip. Whatever, he'll find another story....

A screen popped up infront of Lin. His eyes widened as he stared at what the words on the screen were:

"Go inside and fix the novel? Y/N"