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Bro I like this..the fluff and purpose of the MC and the godlike MC are all dope...all I ask is that you build the romance...keep it happy and fluff no angsty tragic ****...no perverted issei type idiotic MC or wife stealing....its just sad..also the harem..dont make it stupid like 15 or 20//////....keep it small..also bash characters,.... anyway goodluck and goodshow
I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good oleβ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what Iβm saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far) Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant. Anyways, keep up the good work author!
This dude got us hooked on this like a drug then he stopped updating on it letin us wait patiently or not maybe dropped idk.... Tho overall grate read and other autors should learn from this story writing for future its an amazin novel or this 13 chapters with nice story and amazing pace... So im rating 5 stars even if it might be dropped cheers guys and see you if autor ever decides to update this one :)
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i love it when she says babay babay , theres nothin in this world i wouldnt doo. i like it like that oh windows down chillin with radio on. baby baby baby oooohh. our love is like habituallll yeah. fresh prince of dick butt ehhh. candypaint with the white on top . randy dandy i love this novel got me singing some dumb****. really this is good real good.