Primate
Very interesting premise. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing too major. My only gripe with the story would be with a bit of the character design. It would be better to introduce the characters and make the reader care about them before letting anything major happen. Apart from that, great book
This novel is what nature is; peaceful, dream-like, but breaking into the most amazing scenarios that have so much substance to them. Notably, Chapter One is magnificent. From names to descriptions, it is pure perfection. The pacing of the book is immaculate with so many wonders promised by its ending! The only suggestion I had was to use paragraphing to the author's advantage, applicable to only one paragraph which I commented on; this suggestion is called nitpicking! I am in love with this novel, absolutely taken. Great work!