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This webnovel is quite good but the romance between the Mc and The female lead kinda ruined it for me. The romance between the two definitely feels natural and not rushed in any type of way but the dialogue between the two is just so cringe. Everytime there’s a conflict with Don the female lead has to remind him that she loves him a lot etc etc. At first I didn’t mind this but it happens almost every single chapter . It’s just feels so dramatic and cringey to me . I do suggest you read this Webnovel if you don’t mind that small problem tho.
Please stop writing in future tense, example "he would do this" that's future tense please stop, it should be 'he did this".... Bruh,........'...... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .
Sci-fi thriller, action-suspense, well rounded novel. This story is a rollercoaster of emotion; you will love characters and you will hate characters. You will even question your opinion of characters. Other than a few editing quirks, my feelings towards this story are genuinely to the truth that it could be made into an anime, a series or even a movie.
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