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From what I have read, it did not look puppy-love werewolf story. It seemed to be an action-packed, revenge story. so far it's been good, and I would recommend raising the word count in the first dozens or so chapters. Other than that you need to tune the dialogues, it looked too dumb out for the readers and there are a few repetitive words. Good Job, jd.
Now I have only read the first segment of the book so I have not seen how your skills have progressed but for the whole werewolf thing (like descriptions or actions like instead of βfurry hand in his chestβ something like βclawed fist thrusted through his chestβ ect) i would suggest you used more violent, beast like description and maybe look at some books of the genre. I would suggest looking at the book on this site beast: reborn and although your books may lack the same themes (like how in that book werewolves are more βbeast than manβ and yours seem to be more human) it is a godo source of inspiration and werewolf-y, I would also suggest looking at the latter chapters since once apon a time that author was also unskilled. And finally thank you for all of your hard work and I might have said too much (if you havenβt guessed) iβm very passionate when it comes to wolves (especially books about werewolves).
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This is a great novel which I can see myself getting hooked on! I've honestly gotten tired of seeing so many books of the Werewolf genre being filled with unnecessary and badly-executed romance. The first line does well in reeling the readers into the protagonist's situation. On that note, I feel that the paragraphs from the second chapter onwards could be cut shorter and that with typos being adjusted, this book would do well. All the best with this and good work, author! [img=recommend]