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Profiyder
ProfiyderLv5Profiyder

Take my power stones give me more chapters , its not enough. More more more more more more more more more more more if not I shall SWAT ya house with the Skunks

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Neil_Ads
Neil_AdsLv13Neil_Ads

Gonna leave a first 5 stars review to make the book lucky. Please smile upon me Goddes of Luck and make this book popular. The one who leaves a good review on this novel wil have a blissful life.

Profiyder
ProfiyderLv5Profiyder

Just cant get enough, more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Just cant get enough, more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Just cant get enough, more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

SirZed
SirZedLv14SirZed

LoL this is totally out of character but was I the only one wondering what happened to the soul that was supposed to transmiragte? Cos man, damn to transmiragte but end up probably dying while giving your cheat to someone else lol

Gery_
Gery_Lv14Gery_

good plot with nice ideas. I can't wait for more chapters, so I put into my collection. It has a lot of potential, so keep up the good work!!

therealSkywolf202
therealSkywolf202Lv2therealSkywolf202

Added to my collection. I think this story could be really interesting and I'm looking forwards to reading more of the planned chapter that you have. Keep it up, Neil. I hope you have a great experience and a fun time writing this novel.

Noleafyet
NoleafyetLv4Noleafyet

Added to my collection since I love slow world buildings. I want to know more about Ban though. Keep it up Neil! May your write more, edit more, learn more, enjoy more, and of course. Earn more. Muahaha.

Apocalypse_2ndLife
Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3Apocalypse_2ndLife

NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤 NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤 NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤

aoiYuki
aoiYukiLv2aoiYuki

nice kuya! i love how exciting the chapters are, the MC is so fun and interesting as well~ there might be some minor problems in grammar but it doesn't matter since the emotions and descriptions make up for it. I like it!

RJMidnight
RJMidnightLv3RJMidnight

The story is really interesting and I like it. I enjoy the relationship between the grandpa and the MC; it is cute and funny. The problem I have is your writing. You have a nice writing style that know how to keep a reader reading. What the problem is, is the grammar. You have a few grammar mistakes that made me had to reread it little. And your first sentence in chapter one is a sentence fragment. But the grammar doesn’t kill the story. You have a good story here, keep up the good work!

SnowPenguin
SnowPenguinLv3SnowPenguin

The work is well written and well paced with a compelling main character and plot. The work is still in it's early stages, but it's shaping up to be good.