Reviews of The All-Around System
The All-Around System
Czester
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Looks like someone knows our MC's weakness. Wait for my other releases and know the real reason of our MC getting weak because of girls. I hope others can wait for the challenge that our MC will face. So please keep reading my first time novel.
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well i can say i have read worse. but there aren't many that are worst. about the mc in the first few chapters he is more or less afraid of woman. because of almost R*ape in his first life. the next chapters after this rape becomes a main theme. later when he decide he want to do somthing about it, the system forces him for *** with a rando woman. currently chapter 56 he wants a harem because he was a neet anime manga lover. the story arcs are short. half of the chapters are almost filled with the system look. at chapter 56 i'm wondering why there are so many that want more chapters. but not me so i'm dropping this
Reading the first paragraph of chapter 1 had me want to drop asap, skipping to chapter 40 cemented my decision. Rating 1 star. Chapters lack depth, no descriptive writing at all other then basic stuff, lacking in details and most important the story has no flow. I felt this was a creation of a ten year old, the very first paragraph was so lacking and held the most basic description of the main character it was boring.
I am not giving any stars because I havenβt read the story. I donβt know if your the actual owner of that picture, but I have seen it before. Itβs actually used on a game with the artists signature written on it. If you actually want to use it I suggest you get the artists permission. And you canβt claim you donβt know because the original does have the signature on it. This one used is obviously edited
I really donβt know why am I reading this, I really thought that the author would become more discriptive of ..... well everything . Right now what I am seeing and reading here is nothing but words on paper, no real feelings behind the words being said or the actions that are happening . I donβt really know if itβll get better or anything, after all I only read till chapter 8 , but right now all I am seeing is emotionless dialog said by blank faces who we donβt even know who they look like , and chapters that seem to not really have a goal to them just a bunch of jumbled up words together . Nevertheless Iβll keep on reading for the reason that brought all of you guys here, we ainβt got nothing else to read π€£π€£
