Reviews of The Adventure Of Jack - Shackles Of Mortality

Its ok for now. As a new author and its first story it is good enough and has premise. I hope the pace will be faster in a few chapters and the Author will make the chapters longer although I do already see a trend in that direction and that is reassuring.

Good for now, hope the pace picks it up a little but I like its premise! The grammar is correct and as an original it has creativity and a good start. I hope the writer will focus a bit more on character development because its a bit slow and until the the main character lacks somewhat of a specific personality.

Hey everyone, somewhat of a shameless review here. This is my first project on webnovel so I am still getting used to the system and getting everything sorted out. Anyway, I will release probably a chapter a day or every two days, depending on the amount of school work that I have to do. Enjoy yourselves and please comment and suggest improvements that I can make to the story. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoy the novel!