Elzik
updating stability: no update since two week. world background got 4 stars because it is fanfiction and the background is basically already here, added 1 star because of the starting year. character design & story developement both got 2 stars because of the woshes of the character. Any story with wishes is generally worthless anyway, simply because the wishes always ends up to be utterly broken, to the point of making the entire point of telling a story obsolete. Even more so when the author condense multiple wishes inside of a single one... There will therefor obviously not be any evolution of the MC, nor struggles or challenges ahead... And finally, but the most important point, the writing quality. -lack of ponctuation -lack of words/letters -repetition of the same word multiple time (will edit later with an exemple, if i can) -awkward and poorly built sentence (DO NOT underestimate the importance of this point.) a simple use of grammarly or an auto corrector would have solved most of those problems. This shows the investment of the author in his work...
Très intéressant se concept, sachant qu'il s'agit d'un monde qui fusionne plusieurs série, que l'on a pas l'habitude de voir dans la fanfic, sachant aussi qu'il est dans une époque antérieure au série en question. Petit point négatif, sa c'est trop concentré sur la série Harry Potter et pas assez sur les autres, exemple : les séries "the witcher" "true blood" "teen Wolf" non été évoqué que en coup de vent, "the original" a été un peu plus évoqué mais pas tant que sa au final. Le personnage disais vouloir aider Nicklaus mikaelsons, mais il n'a toujours rien fais, il aurait pû faire quelque chose aussi pour la sorcière originel. Bref sinon une seul question, c'est pour quand la suite?
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