Reviews of Omega Of Hope

This is a good story but needs grammar and word use editing. Plus where are the photos mentioned in the text and why does the POV keep changing when it's Rudy's life that is the main focus of the novel.

i hope more chapters are coming soon i really love this book its very rare you will find one like this cause of all the racism of the lgbt community but this book shows you that everyone deserves to be loved no matter what race gender or sexual prefreance you decide nobody should judge you but god so let him be the judge its not our place to!

I am giving this novel an overall 5 because why the hell not lol. I love the novel and so far finished all 52 chapters, it’s a good novel if your into reading yaoi and mpreg related novels.

Ok so I like the idea and concept; but come on I have to spend to much time reading the same sentence trying to decipher what was said. I just can’t. Ugh the writing is so bad and I was hoping for better. I don’t want to hate it but I just can’t read it.

This story was a very hard read. Not because of the characters but the grammar , spelling and punctuation mistakes are terrible (perhaps Google translate?) . I really couldn't read anymore. That being said, it is quite promising although I couldn't follow the characters very well. It's a jumble. I suggest you get someone to edit it again and I will definitely give it another shot. Cheers