Reviews of Teenager in MCU with some powers

this is a good beggining in my book. i hope author don't forget that the mc was only a teenager before. so no matter how mature he is compare to kids his own age he still will be bit hotheaded. i hope u can give mc a good development. i hope mc makes mistake not because he is dumb but because he is new to what ever he is doing.and grow overcoming that mistake. i won't request mc to be strategic all knowing saint.but a mc with a good level head and common sense. if u can do it then the story will improve itself. the character of mc and it's development is important in such fic because the story revolve around him.so always make sure that's it's going good

The characters are good, the english is good..I like the fact that he have powers from anime 'parasite'... I can't believe you only start writing few weeks ago. this is better than most fanfics.. And please Felicia x MC please... Its not like you wrote this book just because of her right...(😶) I am a Shameless Author I know..

It started off ok but then just became hard to read, its obvious that the author is a teen trying to be edgy a bit too hard or just a really edgy guy in his midlife crisis The first 12 chapters are spent making sure you as a reader understand that his parents are gonna die but not making you at all invested in the parents From then on he starts getting a myriad of powers, First is his parasyte power that dosent really work like the parasytes in parasyte Second is his training room and shadow clone jutsu Third is all the blood powers from deadman wonderland. My biggest problem is that none of these powers are given their proper time to be used and instead its just spamming 3 to 6 different blood powers and saying bad one liners while killing everyone The enemys are one dimensional and boring, all being rapist, human trafficers or something similar

Author-san threatened me into giving five star I was gonna give him 4😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

so boring ............................................................ . ......................................................................

Dont waste your time. It starts out as “ok” and gets continuously worse. And theres pedophilia so….if youre into that be my guest and read this.

Pretty meh. The dialogue isn't the best and there are a number of areas in chapters that come off very awkward and unnatural. If you're looking for something to just read quickly on the side lthen sure this is ok. Don't come into this expecting a 5 course meal from a 5 star restraunt because this is like getting a hamburger from mcdonalds.

It is a nice fanfic. The main character is your typical emo, edgy, kind of dumb guy. The Mc is a vigilante. He doesn't mind shedding blood. Although there are some forced stuff... overall it's a nice read to pass time.

This is really bad...The story is written bya an amateur and the characters are shallow...But I was quite entertained...Too bad its dropped.

Good fanfiction. I like his powers and hope that they continue the trend of being bodily powers. I find it a little weird that a ten year old can buy a ticket and go to Japan but for the sake of it being a fanfic I'll let it go. I hope that chapters can be a little longer in the future though, reading them right now only takes a minute or so and it's disappointing after waiting for a new chapter to come out and it being that short.

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author you must continue this novel, it's very amazing and my feels are ..... I don't no how I can to describe my feels . YOU ARE MUST CONTINUE !!!

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I have read many novels and fanfictions where mc's parents die then he goes berserk in rage or whatever so can you do something like they were about to die but then got saved by someone or whatever? PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ (sorry for my English )

intriguing start so far. excited to read more... intriguing start so far. excited to read more.intriguing start so far. excited to read more.

HEY WHERE DID THE STORY GO AUTHOR ITS GONE! PLEASE TELL ME ......................................................................................................................................

I'm liking everything about this story and the characters creation was also good, i just hope the author will update new chapter regularly 😊

Please don't drop this author. This is a real hidden gem. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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