confused4you
Waifu Alisson Argent or Malia Tate Waifu Alisson Argent or Malia Tate Waifu Alisson Argent or Malia Tate ......................................................................... ......................................................................... ......................................................................... ......................................................................... .........................................................................
You succum to readers suggestion way to easily and it turns me off from reading Literally one dude just kept spamming to leave Malia for Stiles and give Stiles powers blah blah blah. And then you instantly remove Malia from ever having a relationship with MC It’s worse because they don’t even stay together and break up in canon You also even started to consider the giving powers to Stiles thing, which is another red flag. Idk if it’s just me, but giving powers to characters that never had any is just not enjoyable to read A VERY COMMON occurrence for teen wolf fanfics is MCs having some sort of relationship with Allison but then they break up and she goes for Scott Since you still have no idea what you want for the romance, and MC and Allison are being set up as a future couple, I can already see this happening…..Its so obvious Of course you haven’t written anything like this yet, and you might not have fully decided yet. You could still possibly leave Allison and MC together or keep Stiles human ~ but you still easily just left Malia out the window after literally ONE guy asked for it. So I dont have much hope really I don’t care for who MC ends up with, I just hope it isn’t a MESS of relationships. Unfortunately I already lost interest I really liked your Legacies ff tho
Eh its ok, nothing special. Its pretty slow paced and boring, not much of anything unique is happening. And, the MC is kinda uhh i guess annoying. None of that really matters to me though, my main issue is the character interactions and dialogue which are just so robotic and fake. Im sure the author will get better the more he writes.
Just wanted to give my honest view of this story. It has the potential to be one of the best if not the best Teen Wolf Webnovel. The main character actually has depth and substance opposed to a lot of other stories where the main character is just added into the friendship of Stiles and Scott. The story that goes on as teen wolf unfolds in unique. While the main story that we all know and love takes place, you expand on the whole world. You added your own flavour/flair that doesn’t subtract from the overall story. Keep up the good work, love your work.
very good story hope it continues to be updated [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
first of all brillant narration .....kinda pretty good story till now....updates also kinda consistent....I you won't let allison die and his close ones also....cause that's a serious let down..........and about the romance I would have hoped him with allison...really....Malia can be the pair but allison can be somewhat friends with benefit now and later a love interests and I am sure Malia can be made to believe as well....anyway it's my personal opinion...byeeee
Realmente creaste una buena historia chico espero que termines tu carrera en medicina y que en un futuro vuelvas a escribir porque realmente sabes darle un toque a tu historia que atrapa a uno así que en lo que llega el día que vuelvas a publicar nuevos capítulos tienes un lector esperando los días meses o años. Te deseo suerte en la universidad y gracias por dar un poco de alegría y entretenimiento.