Ansh_Maini
I liked the overall concept of the story. The plot is kept simple, that is, about our newly hired MC and the mystery behind the death of a certain character. But maybe it's just me still, I feel like the story is a bit rushed? I felt like I was pushed into the middle of the story and just when I thought I can pause and enjoy the flow, it suddenly changed... I hope that Author-san can pace the story well because it is otherwise a good story~ Keep up the good work~
semi-historical work with nicely written storyline. definitely 10/10, but a small issue occurred on this work is, it lacked the attention of detail. Historical genre should have strong attention of detail to made it looks real. Overall, it's a 9.5/10 book you should read! Looking forward to your future chapters author!
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