Tales of Pristinia

There are typographical errors, there are missing words. Thankfully, the context provide clues for the deficiencies. Overall, grammar and syntax are excellent. Each setting is described elaborately that one can really paint a picture when reading. And those alliterations and figurative language provide fun reading. The author has really outdone the use of figurative language.

Cool alliterations! I never expected the main character to be an elf though. However, everything fits perfectly in the plot. Those "fruitful fumes," I just can't get over that repetition of sound.

I like the premise of the story. It's a high fantasy genre plot (correct me if I'm wrong). Though the story is too much fast paced. But I have to commend on the syntax and grammar.