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Reviews of Tales of a Killer Flower

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Tales of a Killer Flower

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X237
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Yet another shameless author review. They seem to be everywhere these days don't they? Anyways I'll be frank with you. If you have any lengthy questions, comments, concerns go ahead and put them here and I will respond to you probably within a few hours. If its a question which would be a spoiler I'll purposefully be vague when answering to avoid spoiling the storyline. But that's a given. Also when this writing prompt ends I will continue the story line till the bitter end even if it doesn't win because Its one I've wanted to do for awhile anyways and the writing prompt was just conveniently ended up starting the day I started this.

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q00u
q00uLv6q00u

It's like Chrysalis met The Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime. They wined and dined and fell in love. Settled down and had a baby. THIS IS THAT BABY! (And I _love_ Chrysalis and The Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime. I'm intending this as praise!)

ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6ExodusGaming555

Some news from the author boys. His computer kinda betray him, making him unable to access his webnovel account. He have tried all kind of methods and failed miserably. So he said unless he managed to regain the account, he will need to transfer the chapters to his new account lol.

Hayato_Shinohara
Hayato_ShinoharaLv10Hayato_Shinohara

One of the few novels I've given an honest 5/5. This author knows how to engrave images in your mind to the point you feel what is going on, whether it's someone dying or a plant struggling to walk. It feels so darn real. It's no wonder that this work got popular so quickly. I can see this become the next "That time I got reincarnated as a slime". I have no doubts!

gaminologue_lebeau
gaminologue_lebeauLv14gaminologue_lebeau

Well, that's definitely a great story. The MC is quite interesting, and so is his situation. The writing quality is good, and it's fitting of a writer. You're easily taken inside the story, without the grammar errors which usually kill the ambiance. I'm fan of the story, and I hope it'll last. So I recommend for you to read it, because even if the description of the story doesn't attract to you, the story is another thing.

witnessglitch
witnessglitchLv4witnessglitch

its good like another one called Chrysalis , it has similar System an the Mc being a flower doesn't have to be like the other one , POWER IN ONESELF.

Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv11Wanderingimmortal

Writing quality:good quality(from Asian my English is [Writing:lvl7/20] [Speaking:lvl7/20] [Reading:lvl15/20] Yup my writing and speaking is basic(mediocre) Stability of updated:good(just don't rush the story) Story development:the story is good so far as I don't feel that it's not rushed like the others(well if have time skips) Character design: balanced build he should consider evolving 3 times from being weak World building:so far so good just don't focused to much on the mc just balanced the interaction with the surrounding of the the mc

gumball221
gumball221Lv5gumball221

A fantastic read, 5 stars from me! πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰Love the authorπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸ€™πŸ€™πŸ€™πŸ€™πŸ€™πŸ€™πŸ€™πŸ€™πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

northpoem
northpoemLv13northpoem

You can easily see where the author has drawn inspiration from (crysalis, i reincarnated as a slime, i re as a sword,...) but the execution is well done and the author seeks to improve by reading rhe comments so thats a plus in my book. All in all a good reincarnated as a monster/object novel.

Dave_de_Humble
Dave_de_HumbleLv14Dave_de_Humble

I fell in love with this book - it is awesome. I like the references to the Crysalis and other works. It is interesting to read. And for the Czechs!!

MysticalRose
MysticalRoseLv2MysticalRose

I love this book already. Just be sure to go back and fix your mess ups X. I know how you are buddy. If you need any help locating the ones I have seen you also know where to find me. Anyway nice story and plot line. I love how you have made it sound like a game, I would totally play this game.

Nijuminty
NijumintyLv15Nijuminty

It's an interesting premise with a relatively solid execution I'll definitely keep reading so please continue writing I'd really like to see where this story is going

Lucifer4102
Lucifer4102Lv12Lucifer4102

................... Jjjjjjjj and I will be in the same place as you can imagine and be a good friend to me and I will be able to make it happen and I will

marldita
marlditaLv2marldita

I've finally finished what chapters there are! I never thought I'd be reading a story about a moving rose fighting bugs, but here we are. Writing quality in the beginning is already good, but somehow the author improves in just a short span of time. At first I was having difficulty with the pacing as the first few chapters didn't have the kind of comma and line break input that made reading comfortable for me, but by chapters 10+ they were well formatted and spaced out. Stability in updating is nothing to scoff at. 2-3 chapters a day? I wish I could do that. At present the story development revolves around surviving and abiding by the system's rules. Of course, it's still early on into the story so we can't comment much on that yet. But! I find the character to be promising. You have mentions of him being a coward and running away from things. I'm excited to see how his development goes. World background is so far stable and is being slowly introduced (the exerpts for the manuals are interesting. reminds me a bit of a sci-fi book ive read with a similar format). There isn't really a problem except for the naming which kind of seemed off. Lora and Xander? Sounds like great fantasy names! Joe? 10/10 why not. But if it's a fantasy setting and there are people named Jake and Rick, meh. That's my only criticism. Overall, it's a wonderful story and needs some more faced paced action. Good luck to the author and I hope you continue to have fun writing!!

mimix2
mimix2Lv1mimix2

A very enjoyable read. Needs a little editing for spelling and punctuation, but understandable with the speed of releasing chapters. Not my normal genre, but enjoyable nonetheless. 😊

MKWAME
MKWAMELv15MKWAME

I love stories about monster evolution and this one, is one of the better stories I’ve read in awhile (that is under 100chs) Grammar - 10/10 Writing style - Fluent/easy to read Story/plot - to early to tell but has a good foundation to build a great story. System - simple to follow if not a little lack luster in details on skills/mutations/stats I.e dmg inc. and hp inc. etc. Overall recommendation - Dig in your roots, cause it’s gonna be a fun ride.

mluna9116
mluna9116Lv12mluna9116

Love it. Plz don't drop it😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

travis123
travis123Lv5travis123

It has a very interesting plot about a guy that reincarnates into a rose. It has a funny sense of humor. You should read it. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Cynk_Napp
Cynk_NappLv5Cynk_Napp

An inspired story of rebirth. Becoming an ambulatory flower. Battling every manner of creatures. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more.

kazesenken
kazesenkenLv3kazesenken

Reading the first 5 chapters, it reminds me heavily of 'That Time I was Reincarnated as a Slime'. It gives off that kind of feel in terms of plot. The MC has a bit more personality though and is very snarky. Since he can't talk, you fully see how his mind works, and I do like those bits that give him more of a face than the generic protagonist. One bit of criticism - the progression of his abilities as he consumes bigger and stronger beings like Katamari Damacy does start getting repetitive after a few chapters of similar things but with different beings. It might be wise to shake things up soon by having our little friend go on a journey and explore the world a bit. Reading only about him surviving and figuring out his skills soon gets old, so you may want to show us more about this interesting world that you are trying to create, not just what is in the immediate view of the protagonist. Other than that, keep an eye on your sentence structure. Your sentences need 3x times as many commas as what you've been using. But it's not so bad that it detracts from ease of reading.