Blodnovskinny
The action and dialogue of this is great and makes the story nearly perfect. The charactes give the story different viewpoints and that helps it make more complex yet welcoming to readers. The only problem is that it would be great if the story had more descriptive writing to help further the narrative and expand the plot.
Dude this is great! Im not gonna lie it takes quite a lot to write fantasy. The reason why its harder than the other genres is because it takes a large amount of creativity and imagination to make something like fantasy. because unlike the other genres fantasy takes a lot more originality. This has that. Good Job!!đ„ł