xavier_101
Hey author-san if this is really your first story I think you're doing great I just get to know this story and I'm already loving it. if you keep up the story and don't drop it this story will be awesome. as I said if this is your story it might take some time to get recognised by others but if you keep it up u definitely will. Because as for my self and my test this story is awesome. so keep it up and drop the storyđ
Writing quality is ok If there are mistakes yhen it proves that the story is so enthralling i get lost in it and dont notice anything Updating stability: i donât know what the author is doing but to update a chapter every single morning is wonderful you have my thanks Well the story is lovely an wonderful Keep it up Please donât do anything which will destroy the flow and immersion