I will be making this review under the 5 chapters published. The story is developed well enough, but can be improved substantially. The grammar is good, but still can be improved. I suggest an increase in chapter published per week, but it is still too early to say something. In short, it is good, but plenty of room to improve.
Ayee! This book has an interesting premise, so that's great! :D To start with, the author has a lot of vocabulary, so I like that! :D But I do think the punctuation could use some work here and there, but it okei :D I'm interested in the characters and what happened to them hehe Great work, author! Looking forward to more! <3
This story really isn’t that great. There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors, making it difficult to follow the story. The main character is very generic. The story undershares information on the world, and there’s nothing to make me sympathize for the main character or her family. I quickly lost interest by the middle of the first chapter because of the lack of detail and the “white-room syndrome.”
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