TALE OF SUPARDS

Yup awesome story great plot read two chapters so far though sometimes you know so and so but it's really great read it ...............................

Not too shabby. a few errors here and there but with some proof reading youll be just fine. the story is still young but it has great potential. keep it up! 🥳

The writing is FANTASTIC! The flow of the story is easy to follow because the narration on the current Point of View is so detailed and descriptive. Nice work Author-san 👍

Your story is really great. The short synopsis really dived me into story. The FL looks like she would undergo many trial. Already a good work. Keep updating author. Hope your book be a mass hit in future .

I will be making this review under the 5 chapters published. The story is developed well enough, but can be improved substantially. The grammar is good, but still can be improved. I suggest an increase in chapter published per week, but it is still too early to say something. In short, it is good, but plenty of room to improve.

I love how the writer made the main character mysterious and still reflect a strong identity. It is well written and engaging... continue writing more chapters ❤

Ayee! This book has an interesting premise, so that's great! :D To start with, the author has a lot of vocabulary, so I like that! :D But I do think the punctuation could use some work here and there, but it okei :D I'm interested in the characters and what happened to them hehe Great work, author! Looking forward to more! <3

It's a very suspenseful story to be sure, leaving you wanting to read on. A few typos with punctuation here and there, but nothing too noticeable. Keep it up!

This story really isn’t that great. There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors, making it difficult to follow the story. The main character is very generic. The story undershares information on the world, and there’s nothing to make me sympathize for the main character or her family. I quickly lost interest by the middle of the first chapter because of the lack of detail and the “white-room syndrome.”

Pretty good.. Though I usually prefer start of a story being lot faster... However, the premise is clear, so are emotions.. it makes up for a good read.

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Great job! I like the pace and how Travia is more understood as the story goes. Maybe proofreading or reading what you've written aloud could help. There's room for improvement on the technical side but there's a lot of potential in the story. Keep it up and keep writing! :)