The concept and professional ways the author put out their work is great! it shows how the author is hooking us up very well! keep up the good work, author!
Very nice cover I have to say, and a beautiful book name. Well done! Interesting way to start, I like it. Very well written, nice work! Keep going!
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Wow this book is very interesting. I love the storyline because it is very unique, although I have read only a few chapters I am sure I am already in love with the book.
Totally enjoyable. The plot concept and the development. It brought tears to my eyes, and it just makes you stop and think, things like this happen. It's a good story that should be given a chance.
I like the plot of the story and the way you right in some part is awesome and I can see a real talent.. I am not a good writers myself but... There are loopholes in the plot.. Like in reality a baby doesn't have any recollection about the very specific thing that happens in their life, specially when they are new born.. It might be safe if it is a POV of the Parent.. Second Language and dictionary is a real challenge for a three year old child what more for analization of the situation.. A baby may feel hostile towards violence and it can be traumatic for a child but somehow it will be a mistery for them of what the situation is all about.. All in all.. It is a good story and has potential.. Keep it up..
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the narrative of the story expresses the memories of the main character in such a masterful way, explaining every scene in detail as if the mc was there spectating the course of events, it caught me since the work is so well done, good job to the author!
The synopsis really good and catching, your writing style is amazing overall a really good novel, you are totally a talented author, keep the good work.
A beautiful concept, i really could feel the sadness of Lorraine! The fact that she faces such an awful event so early in her life. The author really does a great job at constructing scenarios, its so well written you can see the scene build up right in your face😍
I enjoyed what I read, the emotional trauma Lorraine will go through will be this book a lovely read. Nice book, I highly recommend. Thumbs up to the author
The opening chapters start off with a bang. An intriguing premise of the whole story for the readers to explore the later chapters and so on. A must read.
As a read the first chapter it was sad but as you read more it makes you more curious about what will happen next. I love my mom and if I saw my father did that I think that's a trauma for me. Great Job author 👏👏👏
Amazing book, only the blurb got me hooked on the book immediately and even I started reading it. I couldn’t drop it. love it and I can’t wait for the author to update more
Very well written. The author has a way of making us sympathize with Lorraine and her struggles. A really eventful novel with a lot of potential. I wish all the best to the author as they go on writing!
I can relate so much with Lorraine. I also lost my mother so this story will always be in my heart. Beautifully written with great descriptions of the characters loss. Highly recommended story[img=recommend][img=coins]
what a beautiful dark tale, enough ripple to create drama and mystery. It just holds onto you and never let go as the story progresses and you came into a realization that you just got addicted! 😆
Cry cry 😭. I promise I won’t spoil it for everyone but I love this story about family. You can’t chose your family but you can make positive things out of the relationships that you are given. I promise! Heart goes out to Lorraine 😭.
The synopsis of the book was really good same as the plot. I'm really glad that I had given a chance to read this book. I'm hooked. [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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