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I will try to give a synopsis/summary for this story for people who want to read this as the author didn't make one. So basically the mc is the older brother of kakashi and takes kakashi's place like age wise between rin and obito yet not really... I have to specify that he is just a normal person of the naruto world not some reincarnation shit. He uses a longsword(no shit considering the title) The grammar is mostly ok with a few exceptions in like 'he' and 'her' This story is especially good at creating very real feeling characters and making you feel emotions for them and never really feels unnatural. And I would recommend reading this
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WQ: Itβs pretty good, could be better though, some of the sentences are kinda awkward 4.0 Stability of updates: As far as I can tell itβs one a day, but since itβs kinda new (for me at least) I put it at 4.0 SD: Itβs a great and fun read, though it plays with your emotions just a little to roughly, once you push past that itβs great 5.0 CD: Good, probably could be better, but I have no suggestions that could help improve what youβve already written Author 5.0 WB: Itβs Naruto, the world so full plot holes that it resembles a block of Swiss cheese 5.0 XD