Mark_D_Dragneel
The thing of sword art online is seen vividly at first chapters, then it went according to author's imagination which was quite good. A nice beginning with a good story pace, hope author could do at least a couple hundred chapters for this novel. Well the writing quality is first class, just needs a bit editing to push it to the levels of top edited chapters. All the best dear author, hope you could continue the same pace you are going with, as the story is interesting. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Well, I never thought I would be reading something of a fanfiction in my life, but here we are. My only thing is, have you seen sword art online? There clearly isn't any blood at all, and they can also adjust the pain so it doesn't hurt nearly as bad as you're making it out too be. Just food for thought. Otherwise, I'm excited to see what you do with this world.
No no no no no no! please dont do this. Come on. At least conclude the story. I know there may be circumstances but don't let this just flop without a conclusion. You can go on break/hiatus/pause whatever you wanna call it for all eternity for all i care but....Don't just drop the series. To be honest I'd rather just have false hope that you'll come back to continue the story even if there's 100% chance you won't rather than see another long spread story get thrown in the dropped pile.
The most commendable review I can give to a fanfiction is that, "The author took the world of the original story and created his own story line". And in this case, it wasn't the know-the-storyline troupe or the follow-the-og-mc troupe and not innovate new stories. I like that it dug deeper to a normal person's, that is a gamer, view of the game.
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