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Reviews of Sword art online: Bonds

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Sword art online: Bonds

Mark_D_Dragneel

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balubalubalu666
balubalubalu666Lv4balubalubalu666

The thing of sword art online is seen vividly at first chapters, then it went according to author's imagination which was quite good. A nice beginning with a good story pace, hope author could do at least a couple hundred chapters for this novel. Well the writing quality is first class, just needs a bit editing to push it to the levels of top edited chapters. All the best dear author, hope you could continue the same pace you are going with, as the story is interesting. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜†

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DragonRiderOfHell
DragonRiderOfHellLv15DragonRiderOfHell

If you dont read or think this is a bad novel. You must be completely out of your mind. This book is amazing. It is the best. It is AWESOME............

Killerbee
KillerbeeLv4Killerbee

So, here's a review of the first 21 chapters of so. Well, it's another fanfic but the mc is not a person who knows the whole SAO novels or anime, nor does he is a pervert. Great attempt for a good fanfic.

PoppyQueen
PoppyQueenLv4PoppyQueen

As far as I've read, the book is almost perfect in a sense, apart frm a few grammatical errors, it has very expert like flow of writing and the story makes sense too... The characters are well designed and are multidimensional. Overall a good work and definitely recommendable

Ike801
Ike801Lv3Ike801

Well, I never thought I would be reading something of a fanfiction in my life, but here we are. My only thing is, have you seen sword art online? There clearly isn't any blood at all, and they can also adjust the pain so it doesn't hurt nearly as bad as you're making it out too be. Just food for thought. Otherwise, I'm excited to see what you do with this world.

FilthiestCReader
FilthiestCReaderLv6FilthiestCReader

Reveal spoiler

Valtun
ValtunLv3Valtun

Loved it! Looking forward to more, can't wait. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Keep working hard, both in school, in any other important daily activities, and on this story. ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ™‚

Norah_Koch
Norah_KochLv5Norah_Koch

Liked the story. The writing style is better than most writers on WN. Even someone like me was able to understand the gaming environment. So, I think that other female readers should also give it a try. You are doing a good job, Author. It's interesting.

K_Log
K_LogLv4K_Log

No no no no no no! please dont do this. Come on. At least conclude the story. I know there may be circumstances but don't let this just flop without a conclusion. You can go on break/hiatus/pause whatever you wanna call it for all eternity for all i care but....Don't just drop the series. To be honest I'd rather just have false hope that you'll come back to continue the story even if there's 100% chance you won't rather than see another long spread story get thrown in the dropped pile.

Deem_
Deem_Lv3Deem_

nice novel and good start...........though it looks fan-fic.......it has certain potential to become a nice story....writing quality is good....don't drop author-kun

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

what is it about, a summary, those who are already up for grabs, I read several fanfics of this type, with harem without harem, they always leave it.

john_someone
john_someoneLv11john_someone

A fucking mc thatโ€™s not **** M

TumWarden
TumWardenLv10TumWarden

Reveal spoiler

MichaelLouisXXI
MichaelLouisXXILv13MichaelLouisXXI

Hmmm Good, worthy read. Would recommend to anyone But there needs more chaps tsk I didn't fail to increase the line's length With every line i typed hehehehehehehehehe

Suzaku_
Suzaku_Lv4Suzaku_

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Aerys
AerysLv13Aerys

The most commendable review I can give to a fanfiction is that, "The author took the world of the original story and created his own story line". And in this case, it wasn't the know-the-storyline troupe or the follow-the-og-mc troupe and not innovate new stories. I like that it dug deeper to a normal person's, that is a gamer, view of the game.

TheManCandy
TheManCandyLv13TheManCandy

not a review just asking if this is dead. i don't wanna read incomplete fanfics.

Trunks7
Trunks7Lv3Trunks7

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