bitterlouise
I don't know what happened during the three years but your writing style is nice with little to no error. You've certainly improved and it shows in your writing. One small thing though— and I think you're planning to change it later— is your book cover. It's fine, but it will garner more readers if it's eye-catching. Also, no one has probably said it but congrats on overcoming a portion of your life and getting past your writer's block. Those two are a real pain if you ask me but at least you got over it ^-^
THIS GOT ME HOOKED AFTER READING THE FIRST CHAPTER AND THE NEXT AND THE NEXT TO NEXT AND THE NEXT AFTER THAT. I have eventually stop reading just to give a review. This book has its awesomeness, great description, perfect flow, not fast phasing and not too slow and everything in between. This is must read story. Trust me, it won't bore you, guys
It is a novel that helps collective and individual memory: "Sweeter than Fiction", Of course reality surpasses all narrative. And the trigger is: A nightmare. I'm a bit of a student of these cases because I do therapies with people who went through "this type of nightmare" and who couldn't lead a normal life. And it is an evil that affects several generations and degenerates from generation to generation. If not, see the biblical case of the flood: Why did Noah build the boat? (Because practically all of humanity at that time had "sexual nightmares") Congratulations to its author, of which: "two things" caught my attention: (1) the name: "bitter Luisa" and (2) the cover; because it had a white background with big black letters. I would like to continue reading, if it is a psychological essay.
A story revolved around traumas of the past and forbidden romance 🤌 With a touch of mystery that the author manipulated well in the early chaps. There isn’t much to complain about with this novel other than the tense inconsistency, the author continuously alrernates between the present tense and the past (Hope that get fixed soon), but otherwise, it’s a nice read with close to perfect flow. 👍 The author’s descriptive skills are on point, easily appealed to all five senses but I wish the cover did more for the eyes…it’s kind of bland for a romance novel 🤷♀️
I am very curious to know what might have happened to the FL's oast🤔.. Also the ML is in love with his brother's wife 😲😲... I think l should read the whole story to know what will exactly happen..... Other then the error mistakes everything is nice and fresh l can tell so far..... All the very best author and keep going😘