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I'm so angry that I didn't get to find this gem when it came out. But on the other hand I'm glad I didn't because the binge reading of this is awesome. So first of all, the story has a good pace to it. Not super slow nor super fast. I love how the problems are settled really cleanly as well. Secondly, there are other side couples and it's sweet af (still love the main couple the most tho. Hehe). Third, there are no troublesome misunderstandings and quarrels that will drag on and on just to drag the whole story. It's all sweet, fluff, and a lil bit of action. Love the comedic tone in the story every now and then too. I feel like it's a mixture of Hidden Marriage & Trail Marriage but without ALL the fillers and more. Typos for a couple of chapters but nothing to worry about (I mean come on, Chinese novels has more typos and we are still reading it). Not gonna lie, this is the first and only Original novel up till now that I spent all (or at least needed) SS in one go because it's THAT good of a read.
Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter. The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author.
The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between. Maybe it's just me π€·π»ββοΈ but it's not my cup of tea.
Eventhough quite a good story for reading but.. Never ending cases keep on going and seen will never stop at the moment.. feeling the same similar incidents keep on happening.. Wondering when will the story will end.. If more than 500 chapters, then this will be hard to continue.. Sorry but thanks to author.. π΅β
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Since I started this story Ive been looking forward for the next update/chapter. This is simply my cup of tea. Strong male character and strong female character. Action packed and I like the development of other characters too.. I love the relationship of MX and JMC.πβ€ Congrats author. Looking forward for more single dog-friendly scenes.π
Hi ...Im new here I really like the story and how it is going so far its just that from the start I feel that how they fell in love and how fast they expressed it is just too fast. I mean its great that theyβre straight forward with their feelings but I wished there could have been more wooing in ML part. I know the ML waited for her for 5 years but still they didnβt know each other that much when they met again so yeah he shouldβve woo her first or FL shouldnβt have showed her true feelings so easily so there would at least be a challenge in it. But all in all I still like the novel! Keep improving author!!