Reviews of Sweet Desire

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I'm genuinely enjoying the story so far! The plot seems intriguing and the characters keep you curious to read more. Since it's still in the starting stages there isn't much to say but I want to see where this goes! Will continue reading this!

This book deserves 5 rating for the effort author has put in explaining places and characters.. only draw back is paragraphs are too long and there's no update for a long time.. I hope you will get back on track.. All the best dear author

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I like the writing, the story is very good and I’m always looking for the next chapter! I loved, I think you have a great potential as an author! Your writing is amazing

Good story whereby the MC life is not an easy & fairytale. She got her life change when she begin he chores in the palace. I'm positive her revenge & real goal will begin when she starts serving the empress. It's like reading a drama not a novel. I enjoy & like it! Looking forward for more.

Just start reading hope is an interesting story with good strong character.................... .................................................

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Beautiful storyline, but the author should try and repetition of line and give correct spellings, otherwise I love the novel . 😚😚😚😚😚😚👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

*Remember, this review is based off the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: You had a few grammatical errors, but they were not that bad. Also, I noticed that you had not updated in the past month, and you also had another large gap w/o much if any explanation before hand... I suggest you try your best to rectify these issues. Positive Feedback: You did great on the plot and whatnot, strong story so far.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue reading this story and thank you for the time you have taken to write this story so far... I just hope you don't drop it. Score: WQ 4/5 SoU 3/5 Rest 5/5

a good story with grammatical errors. not many authors are willing to write on Historical Romance. Keep up the good work and you can always edit your errors so don't worry about it too much

This story has some potential. I like the idea you narrate the MC's daily struggle and what kind of emvironment she has. I also like that though she had a pure heart i guess, alas her body isn't. BUUUUT, you really need to work on your grammar, dialogues, punctuation marks and the used of proper tenses. Because I really felt lost. It was like everything is all over the place and it was hard to concentrate or immense myself in the story if because it has tooo many errors. I, myself isnt a good writer but as a reader this is what I could say. I hope you could edit or revise the whole chapters before you go on because it'll become a problem in the future.

The sentences really need to be properly structured. Focus a little more on how to start and end a sentence. Explain the description of an object more, use Grammarly to spell check and find grammar errors. The story is well thought but try to present it a brilliant way too. Because a story is good enough when readers can read it without frustrating themselves with a messy writing. Well, i hope you improve these points and give us with many good stories in the future too. But you don't need to worry, i am being a little mean but i also write a novel and the things i pointed out someone pointed out these for me too. btw Good luck and keep working hard

The story seems to be well thought out and the info dump is done in a concise manner! But you really could use a bit more proofreading. Might be helpful to read through your chapters a few times before publishing!

Nice setting, nice emotions. Keep up the good work. Hope to see u soon.!!!! 😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

Since the novel is still in the beginning stages there isn't much to say. I didn't find many mistakes. I would say proof just a bit more. Overall the plot looks interesting and I am intrigued with how the story will unfold for Mei Sou Fei.

You could wor on the punctuation. There are some great websites that do. But so far the book is good ......................................................................................

This novel is really nice you just need to to write more chapters cause' ur writing is fine but the readers will want to read a novel with maximum chapters ^^ x keep writing