TheElisse
It all starts awfully for the MC, and then it gets even worse. Sincerely, I was going to stop if it went like that for a chapter more, but then, there arrives who I suppose is the ML. He's so kind that you suspect it's a trap. Not just that he doesn't torture the MC, he even lets her rest when she doesn't feel well (and after the two first chapters, it's like winning the lottery). The fact that I'm complaining so much about the starting point means that it's well written since it's probably what the author wanted to achieve :) Good job!
A tragic plotline! Such intensely portrayed characters and well thought out storyline deserves a good read. I felt as if the plot progressed very fast which left me all stunned and curious. The cruelty and murder scenes weren't unsighty to the readers and the tragedy and humiliation faced by Rosalie makes all the more thirsting after flaceslapping moments... Nice work author!
Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love everything norse and viking! This story is amazing! The main leads are very cute and loving! I like the action and rising tension in the story. My only pet peeve is that the male lead kinda suspicious. LIke he has fallen for the female lead at first sight but it feels as if he knew her from before or something... i dunno
To begin with, this novel is about Vikings and this is what attracted me the most ! I've read 10 chapters so far and based on those chapters, l think it's a good novel with a well written plot and a creative background. The settings for each chapters have been described in detail and the vocabulary and grammar is pretty well too. However, l think the story kinda progressed too fast. Apart from this, l think this novel is pretty good overall. Thank you for your hardwork author !💖 Fighting ~
Very well I really liked this story here! Perhaps because I have recently watched/read Viland Saga, which is also about vikings. But now, this is how you start a story, grabbing you by the first chapter and only letting you go when you reach the lastest chapter! It also helps that the characters are well written and engaging, and as for the writting, it's good, really good. All in all a great story in the making, that I will surely come back to!
I should say the setting is amazing. Vikings plus cute and heartwarmimg romance plus action... It really caught my interest. The start was so emotional and frustraiting that I wanted to get in there and help her... And I loved the ML an their cute moments 😊 Author please keep up with the good work! This is an excellent story! [img=recommend]
Good descriptions, action right at the beginning, and early promise of romance. I read 5 chapters and enjoyed every one. (Autocorrect has caught you once or twice in the first two chapters, dear Author, it's obvious you know how to spell, but it substituted one word for another. It happens in my book too!) Keep it up!!