Plagued666
The Mc is a powerful, knowledgeable and experienced guy (from the pieces of his back story he should even be aware of how to sail in the shit sea that is politic and that you should be careful) but more often than not the author use the excuse of him gelding himself back and make him act as a naive fool to let the plot folloe Canon. for 89 chapters it has been pretty much forcing the plot to the the Canon plot even whne things could be changed or better say should be changed because of the Mc presence and his interactions... It may be a way to lay the foundation for the future changes but based on what it has been showed the Canon story will remain mostly ... The only tru change done was the Mc beating the Mountain and Jaime in the tournament but at the end of the day it didn't/won't change much. So the author write in a good English (in my opinion of not native English speaker) and he may have good ideas but for my taste and in my opinion he went too far with following the Canon plot based on the Mc he introduced and most of all he made the Mc to passive both towards the happenings of the plot that towards anyone else in the story
This is less of an fanfic and more of an fan recap. I'm currently at 74 and kind of wondering what the point of this story is. We are just following original character in vanilla story, and nothing he does seems to have any effect on world. And author seems to be perfectly content just re-writing GoT from different pov. I mean come on, it's freaking 74 chapters already... -.- I'm just finding it hard to justify reading this, it's not bad, it's actually really well written, but there's just no point.
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Tienes una gran historia amigo, buena trama y algo divertida, una sugerencia serias que mostraras mas partes que no se muestras en las pelΓculas como los torneos, fiestas y viajes, espero sinceramente que sigas hasta el final en la historia por que tiene mucho potencial, te apoyo con piedras de poder
its pretty good but it could do better, right now its good but the only thing i have a problem is that the mc isnt described properly and that the only thing i know about him is his white hair and yellow cat like eyes and that he is 18, not to mention the occasional name mistake that instead of jason theres Geralt or some, its pretty good just confusing so if your the type who doesnt like that kind of thing you can just go. anyhoo, i just reviewed cuz its a GOT but yeah, gotta go crusade now
Ce novel est tellement bien , mais depuisaujourd'hui je ne peux plus le lire, car ils me force a installer l'application pour lire le reste, cependant tu ne peux pas changer la langue sur l'application ni traduire le roman, donc l'application pour moi qui ne sais pas lire l'anglais est complètement inutile, il n'ya qu'avec le navigateur internet que l'on peut tradurie les pages, pas avec l'application.
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