SleepDeprivedSloth
This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk.
Hello~ Hello~ This is me, the Author. So this will be the 102th review. Holy Sheet, I never thought I would get so many reviews. ... Well, so I don't have much to say, cause I am of course, biased, for me, my story is definitely 5 stars. You can read other reviews. I am only here to increase the review count of my book, (Yes, I am greedy.) This can also be treated as another question-answer thread, since there are already 60+ replies on my previous one. Ask whatever questions you have here. I'll answer them as soon as possible. I wish you a happy reading experience.
My expectations for this novel was low but HOLY FÜÇK! This is so addictive! Although the story is mostly filled with sêx scenes and the story looks slow paced, but its so addictive that you will ignore it and will fall into the heaven of smüt! There are several JoJo Reference available here. Looks like Author is a weeb as well as a man of culture. UMU The character designs is so good. We have a mild Tsundere who wants to be dominant one, we have a clumsy one, we have a kuudure and we have an M! AND this is just the start! Updating Stability is awesome! World Background is meh but who needs it when we have smùt filled plot!? What more do you need? Just go and fùçkïñg read it!!
Okay, since we have many reviews, I believe it is now my turn to review my own novel. I don't really have much to say, I mean, my review will be heavily biased since it is my own review, so treat this review as a QnA session. If you have anything to ask, just ask here and I will reply as soon as I see it. Thank you! Keep Reading! And Enjoy~
This novel is a "Mission type system" which is lame, because it will be a forced plot. Don't like this type of system. Lame and boring. It will never run out of forced plot. If you are a man of culture and don't bother with this lame mission type system then it may garner your taste/interest. I would like this novel if the system is not that lame mission type.
Reading Status: C21 Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 3/5 The total score: 4.2 The writing quality is pretty good, so even with an instant google translation, I can understand everything perfectly, although a little more detail would be appreciated sometimes, you know. It is worth mentioning that sometimes more dialogue makes the interaction more organic, but it depends on the context, where sometimes the descriptions can say much more than a character's point of view. The important thing is to virtually understand the sensations described (as a reader), which makes everything better to enjoy. The upload stability is consistent, I can not say more. I can infer the development of the story, but I still look forward to seeing how it will be dealt with Kingdombuilding, one of my favorite tags. Which relates to the world background, well, while it's understandable that the central point of the story is the concept of the MC's system, the world that the MC will experience is still green. The character design is what catches my attention, and I can say that the author is consistent with this. I can understand that at some point there are always generic characters, and not all of them can be reflected by words like "alive" or at least dynamic, but from what I can see, I won't be disappointed. The "important" characters in the story will not be empty per se. The concept of the story is what fundamentally attracted me to read. The synopsis reflects well what you will find if you read this, so I won't beat around the bush. If the potential I see is used in the right way, this can be very good. #NoNTR Otherwise, good job.
Dropped for now (ch 680). I'm honestly not liking the current story, really lame writing and boring. Then there's the Author suddenly changing the MC's cultivation technique. This resulted in MC's cultivation to regress and halted the story, which was in the middle of transitioning to the new continent. Should've given this technique on the first mission rewards, not at this point of the story.
I give it a 4.8 why? This is the reason you, the author, should know. The main character did not reach the level of IQ Light Yagami. Therefore, the evaluation of the novel did not get a full score. Just kidding 🤣 But I am serious when I said that the novel will get the full degree if you take the mystery and excitement from the anime Death Note.