Stephanie
I'm loving this story. Honestly, the synopsis itself already catches the attention of readers. It was short but precise, it makes you think what could be this story is about and what kind of world this will be. I love the way the Author began the first chapter, the choices of words to narrate the first few paragraph was deep and meaningful. And for the characters, it was well thought how each character was designed and how unique they are. This book will surely get the readers immersed at how interesting and exciting this story is as the story goes by. Job well done Author!
The opening itself has potential- it’s in good flow, direct and straight to the point. You can tell what is going on right away with no doubt. Then comes to the storyline, which is smooth like butter. It has a whole picture of what is happening. The author loves using visualisation in her stories for audiences themselves to picture and she does it well. [img=recommend][img=recommend]