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As of 3 chapters, there isn’t much that I can say about the overall quality yet. The plotline, as of Ch.3 seems interesting, yet also a bit cliched. (The wonder of tropes) The female MC is already introduced to vampires in the beginning, which is nice. Grammar-wise, this book is filled with a lot of grammar issues. I hope that the writer can tidy them out at one point. Sincerely, CodeW
While the story was understandable, there were also many simple grammar mistakes that if fixed would greatly improve this story. There are only three chapters at the time of my writing this, so it is hard to accurately judge the story development, character design, and world background. From what I have read I feel like overall this story could use more description. There are not many details about the main character nor the world she is in, which prevents an immersive experience. However, I think the author has an interesting idea and I am wishing them the best as they continue to expand on it!!
I wish the author has written some synopsis. Without it the reader is blindly plunging into this supernatural world. Nice storyLine. I like a book that has vampires in it. So, not disappointed in that area. However, there are a lot of errors- punctual and grammatical. When you write a book its impossible to write without errors. So, overlooking that part, the story is gripping till now. I wonder what happens next?
This is actually a great novel, very intriguingly inspiring, as it will drag readers into a world of paranormal wanting to see how the unfolding event will climax, it is like watching a live movie. I think with thorough editing, this book will sure be a good read. Beyond the some grammatical errors here and there, the novel has served its purpose. Just 3 chapters, it is already making me crave for more like Oliver Twist. I cannot wait to see how Chanel the rare breed will cope in the world that she knew not herself to be part of, but part of.... Great novel! I recommend this novel for those who love good read, this could become one in a million. Kudos to the author!