Ethereal_Nymph
Good fanfiction (in other people's eyes) but for me this fanfic is barely good! well, its my bias though~ I really dislike it when fanfic MC stealing key encounter of Original MC! although Han Sen was not my favorite MC, his drive to make his family life better is what I find likeable! if I was the original author, Han Sen will die soon from ambush of his enemy! that bead is the start of his path into strong evolver (well, I fogot the name)! so, if Han Sen can't find it then Han Sen within origonal is already gone! I don't carr about compensation or something like this fanfic MC will help Han Sen with giving armor! in my eyes this fanfic MC is the biggest hypocrite in my eyes! don't worry though, its only bias from my perspective! just continue the way you enjoy writing it, after all this is your work! giving 3.2 star is me giving critize yet not insulting you! unloke those who gave 1 star! ahh, sorry for bad grammar! last word from my review, I don't recommend everyone who like Han Sen yo read this since you guys will have reacyion which is worse than me!
The original super gene is a novel with a new kind of setting that is very interesting to read.but the author has inconsistencies in his novel and many illogical things which made me loose interest in it after 2000 chapters(lnmtl,google translate).but this fan fic is an absolute trash that only the zealot fans of super gene will like.the authors made the mc so illogically op that he doesnt even need to come to sancturary to become a god.he doesnt even need to chew his food ,the author will teleport the grinded juice in to his stomach.the author kept wiping mcs ass all the time.we dont see him working for any thing he got. To put in a single sentence this novels theme is "pies falling from the sky"
So far I like what I see. The plot is moving a little too slow for my tastes but I understand that is the way your writing works. Usually on fanfiction novels the authors skip over a lot of details and even character insight and development, thats why you see for example a Naruto fanfiction where the author goes from the waves arc to shipuden in less than 30 chapters. This author on the other hand is taking his time to develop the story without even entering the main timeline of the original story. All in all its pretty good.
A good fanfic with good writing and peace with the only "negative point" is the character description (i´m very strict in this point because i like the details for better mind image and this kind of stuff).... But i REALLY recomend this fanfic that i can wait for more chapters and how the will progress
I do not understand why the author would use Super Gene and try to stick to the storyline. Why not make an alternate universe or same universe but at a different point in time. By doing anything the whole storyline of Super Gene comes crashing to the ground and most if not all knowledge the mc has is useless, except for generalized knowledge.