Atinuke
You have a good story line great concept and confident scenes.; the fights accurate descriptions attention to minuscule details. Absolute perfect timing introduction of the characters readers easily grasp what their behavior should be or would develop as the story progresses. Captivating and I love it!
I’ve read so many books, and this has to be one of the most elaborated world building ever. You can tell that the author did their intensive research to craft such a detailed universe, and the prologue has helped me to be more immersive into the plot, and to understand the war raging on like as if I’m reading a history textbook. Continue with your chapters and loving your writing style 👍🏼
The story is pretty amazing, the way the author shows it in the synopsis already made you excited... it made you wonder how the story will go on... A historical love story with a lot of this... the first page is introducing the meanings which I can see the author thought much for the readers to connect to the Story... The second one is the real start... if you guys looking for a spicy romance with historical background... you should try this one... Kudos to the author!!!