I have retracted the chapters, a happy surprise for some of the readers, as I am now in the process of rewriting the chapters. The chapters will be posted sporadically when I've finished rewritting up to a certain point. Some if not more than a few things are being changed, but the core of the story will remain the same, the main character, the time period, etc.
Hope to see you in a while, when the chapters are posted.
Advice or input will be appreciated as it helps in the long run.
Criticism will be read and deleted after a set time period.
Comments like 'dropped' or 'hate the story' -> (with no solid input on how to improve the story) will be deleted.
I won't be deleting the previous comments from before I have rewritten the chapters.
Yours sincerely,
The author.