A place to help the author

well, as you guys have seen. my writing still need to be improved, there's a lot of awkward point where it will cause you guys to be confused or turned off by it. causing your reading experience to be disturbed...

Well as a new author that has a lot of problems in RL, i need to ask for advice to improve myself. So here's the question:

1. How should i write a fighting scene?

2. What kind of action do you guys want?

3. Does my writing style good enough?

4. Does my characters feel odd somehow?

5. Like is it too dead or not showing enough emotion or something?

6. What else should i take note of?

This is the most important question that i need to ask you guys! I need this because i want to better myself at writing a story.

Although my English is still a mess, i can at least make it bearable. I promise it won't cause you a brain damage.

I will keep on doing my best to bring out a readable chapter. Of course there would be some mistake in every chapters, i am after all still a human, not a robot.

If possible, please tell me where i made that mistake, so i can fix it if i have the time to do so.