Reviews of Strongest Ninja In A Hero Society
Strongest Ninja In A Hero Society
Vermillion_Yormsky
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I was really enjoying the novel until the author decided to make it so retarded with his mom getting kidnapped, right after just escaping a hell hole, even worse he actually listens to a stranger just after she was kidnapped only so he could have a connection to the hero school, as if anyone with that amount of power anyone would care for what a stranger says in that moment, worse of all he actually deletes the flying thunder seal when is impossible to erase unless you know about seal to a master level, even for obito after minato mark him in naruto. If you wanted to make a connection with the plot should have the mother kidnapped all the fight with all might and rescue with his help and the flying thunder seal instead of just leaving his mother to the grace of God for who knows how long! π€¦ββοΈπ€¦ββοΈπ€¦ββοΈ
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He became a hero! Why? He would have made a better antihero , and logically why waist time becoming a hero wen he can look for his mother faster and soner if he went villain (he coud interogate/ torture and have access to more info than as a hero), he already knows how to train himself so why waste time competing against children. If his mother was not kidnapped it could had made sense to go the academy rout.
Started good became terrible/stupid. The kind of stupid you get when you force a plot point even when itβs shouldnβt happen based on the context of the story. Become strong enough to fight all might with just your body. Have biju leve chakra and affinities. can make jutsu and has the eyes of the sages mother. Has byakugan to see through walls and underground. Cryβs like a ***** when mother is kidnapped and waste month on living like he canβt do anything. Even though heβs in the top 5 strongest people on the planet Now his motherβs is being a experimental guine pig and suffering a fate worse than death. For some who said he love her and started crying when she was almost raped. He sure is quick to abandon her to become a hero. For some with two souls and should be jaded by life as a slave. This whole become a hero first and save your mother later plot point. Is just forced and contrived when you can break islands with your fist and can spam shadow clone to brute force search cityβs in minutes. Itβs like the authors wanted to inserts mc in ua and be a hero but went about in the worst way possible.
I've only read 6 chapters so far, so my opinion my completely change if this turns into some trash nonesense harem-that-makes-no-sense kinda story later on. This is actually really fucking good. There is a billion MHA stories, and I haven't seen a single one that actually took advantage of the entire world. They're always either related to the main characters, or going to school with them. Our MC starts off in North Korea as a freaking slave! Shits already intense from the get go. I love the idea of checking out what North Korea would be like, if superpowers were a thing. This is really creative. I hope the author keeps this creativity.
Just read the novel cuz itβs amazing!!!!!!πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ―π―π―π―π―πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Your story is amazing never stop and pls don't drop..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Sorry to say that but you really should read your story from the beginning till the end and see if you like what you read or not because I see many changes in the MC is personality and all might is way of thinking And not to mention the flaws in your story like the family's bloodline the seal, the time it took for the kidnapping, the fight with all might, the choice of joining the UA high school instead of using ninjutsu and other means to locate his mother And if you think that there isn't any tracking technique that can locate her then you are mistaking because there is many like for example, Kakashi's summoning technique Fanged Pursuit Jutsu that can summon dogs that can track the target without using chakra or the shadow clone and byakugan combo, I know that you may say that they don't have chakra and staff like this but did you forget that chakra is actually the body's life force and even if they don't have chakra the byakugan has many abilities like heat detection x-ray like vision or even Kaguya is ability to see into someone's memory and thoughts π©π©So you see author you are not using everything you have correctly Good luck with your story
