Strongest in DxD

Some useful information. #1 English is not even close to my main language, so don't expect good grammar, just something readable. #2 This fanfic, it's just something to pass the time, so I don't expect anything at the level of paid writers. #3 If you did not like the fanfic, just remove from your library. #4 Yes, the protagonist is not how you want him to be, and if you're feeling bad, write your own fanfic.

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guys like I say mc use sharingan with alter emotion to rewrite their memory to love mc . That's mean no love her just manipulative so we need tag manipulative mc here and tag self insert . Why not hypnosis ? that's more relevant . Use hypnosis to add feeling but not Change like a feeling first love then he doesn't do anything more . Just read novel The hypnosis and you know what I mean

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I'll be honest. The first 30 chapters has only enough of the story that could be considered in less than 5 chapters. Most of the word counts are describing the dress and appearance of people again and again which is boring. Mc is like Sasuke driven by revenge and has Shisui's sharingan Kotoamatsukami and he brainwashed girls making them love him. No true feelings and treats everyone as pawns. MC is too op considering his powers in the description, but his character build is too sloppy. Even with the power equal or surpassing Ophis, MC summons others from cards from the system which are female versions of male characters and threatens them which made this novel unreadable. Overall too many useless words and descriptions. Not suitable for all readers. I quit at chapter 30.

Revenge driven mc is very cool. Add to the fact that its DXD is even more fun. Add to the fact that he is Op is better. And add to the fact that he might have a powerful Maid waifu is much better. Nice

very nice revenge story, but the reason that i am giving 4 stars is because i was not here for a revenge story at all! the sinopses made me believe this was going to be a lighthearted slice of life story, not a tragedy at the start that turn the mc into a revenge driven sasuke that wants to erase the supernatural world!

Came from your other book (Gilgamesh in DxD) which is amazing!!! Have great expectation for this one too!!! ........................................................................................

story is good just be warned before reading 1. Mc is super evil even more than akame ga kill novel evil(not that the way they enjoy killing people but he just kills people) 2.Mc is overpowered and super evil and wants to exterminate the devils,fallen angels,angels because they killed his family(well killing them is justifies but not extermination where his reason his plain stupid and kinda emo guy) 3.Mc gets a heads up from an unknown entity that said(down be consumed by power and hatred) but he does exactly that sooooo stupid mc . .. well after knowing all of this i stoppded reading only occasionally checking latest chapter if mc would know his wrong but nooooooo.he is still emo maniac psychopath soo yeah read at your own risk.

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I've read so many fanfics on DXD, so many that it became boring. So when i see this fanfic, i thought it would be one of the many "boring" fanfics i have read, but i enjoy this fanfic to be honest. Not like the others, it didn't join Rias' peerage and didn't collect waifuus like akeno, rias, koneko, asia (i don't know if he will collect them, maybe he will just use sharingan on them hahahaha lol).

The story is really good. But the author pays too much attention to the description of what is not necessary. For example, a description of non-original characters that we all already know (their appearance, clothes, mood, facial expression, and so on). The same applies to the description of the area. It would be better if more attention was focused on the plot, rather than describing what we can see just by searching the Internet. This also applies to the author's second work. (written with the help of a translator)

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Nice Op protagonists with revenge. .. Big NiCe ⡆⣐⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠅⢗⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠕⠕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕ ⢐⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⣕⢕⢕⠕⠁⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠅⡄⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕ ⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠅⢗⢕⠕⣠⠄⣗⢕⢕⠕⢕⢕⢕⠕⢠⣿⠐⢕⢕⢕⠑ ⢕⢕⢕⢕⠁⢜⠕⢁⣴⣿⡇⢓⢕⢵⢐⢕⢕⠕⢁⣾⢿⣧⠑⢕⢕⠄ ⢕⢕⠵⢁⠔⢁⣤⣤⣶⣶⣶⡐⣕⢽⠐⢕⠕⣡⣾⣶⣶⣶⣤⡁⢓⢕ ⠍⣧⠄⣶⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣔⢕⢄⢡⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⡑ ⢠⢕⠅⣾⣿⠋⢿⣿⣿⣿⠉⣿⣿⣷⣦⣶⣽⣿⣿⠈⣿⣿⣿⣿⠏⢹ ⣔⢕⢥⢻⣿⡀⠈⠛⠛⠁⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡀⠈⠛⠛⠁⠄⣼ ⢕⢕⢽⢸⢟⢟⢖⢖⢤⣶⡟⢻⣿⡿⠻⣿⣿⡟⢀⣿⣦⢤⢤⢔⢞⢿ ⢕⢕⠅⣐⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⣿⣿⡄⠛⢀⣦⠈⠛⢁⣼⣿⢗⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕ ⢕⢕⠅⢓⣕⣕⣕⣕⣵⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣕⢕⢕⢕⢕ ⢑⢕⠃⡈⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣆⢕⠄⢱⣄⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⢁ ⣿⣦⡀⣿⣿⣷⣶⣬⣍⣛⣛⣛⡛⠿⠿⠿⠛⠛⢛⣛⣉⣭⣤⣂⢜⠕

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this is the most forced story I've ever read, I mean the author introduced his family for two paragraphs and then killed them. turning the mc into an edgy emo ignoring plot holes, well we are talking about dxd a world where there is a sacred gear with the power to revive the dead. to me this is nothing but a second rate forced revenge story. I'm just giving my opinion sorry if I offended anyone but I just want to make it clear how outraged I am with this fic ps: sorry if you couldn't understand the comment because I'm using automatic translator because I don't speak english

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