CloverMLangley
Seven chapters in and its been an awesome read so far. Seems like a cliché storyline at the beginning, but it's definitely the kind of story that grows on you. The addition of new characters feels seamless and natural. The best part is obviously the quality of writing. It's simply brilliant. You can keep reading and reading and reading without feeling any sense of monotony. The only thing this story lacks is the stability of updates. It's understandable that the author doesn't get paid. But a steady rate of release is of paramount importance when it comes to keeping new readers hooked to the story.
Well by reading synopsis, I think this plot is very similar to the Jennifer Lawrence new movie "RED SPARROW". I don't know whether you thought of same plot or whatnot, but I would be very glad if it isn't the same as movie. I see a lot of potential in this plot so please squize your brains out and shake the whole world. **: I am thinking of writing a novel like theme of death note starting from may too.