Stellar Warfare Online

(Note: This Synopsis might spoil the first few chapters.) A boy by the name of Gil Erderan recently moved to california this summer, having enrolled with a new school. He planned for a normal school life but little did he know a new revolutionary game by the name of "Stellar Warfare Online" was released, that in which would change his life. Author's Note: Hello there, I'm a new author who wanted to start writing. If my story, grammar, or any other aspect of my story has any flaws I'm open to constructive criticism, pointers, tips, and just people pointing out mistakes I've made. Also sorry for the terrible name, I really had nothing else to call the novel or game.