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Your story is great. I'll admit, the fact that you have Cloud, Tifa and Aerith does affect this rating. But this is mainly because of the story. I like how you went against canon from the start. It gives off that refreshing take on a story. Not only that but I love the character developments aswell. You are doing great. Looking forward for more. đ
____Written by Google Tranlate Portuguese/English___ I'm enjoying the book, but sometimes I get really confused by the lack of details like for example in chapter 22: "There was no shot, but he heard a bullet tearing through the air, about to hit his head, but it was slow as a snail in his eyes. He lifted the book, closed the book with his hand and walked away from the phone booth.'' did the bullet hit him? did he dodge? if so, how? let's say he lifted the book , was it to stop the bullet? or did he just close the book? this kind of thing happened several times in this story, I don't like it, it makes me confused, I want to know what happened, but it seems the author jumped? forgot to write?, it seems like a blank space that should be filled in but is empty.
Chapter 5, and i must say that i was scared and worried at first.... FF7+Howards+Marvel? But the author knows what he is doing. THe grammar is excellent too. And i quite like how he is developing the trio of Cloud, TIfa and Aerith so well.. Aerith turned out to be very mischievous once unleashed about her worries.
Que puedo decir me acabo de pasar el final fantasy y quede co ganas de mas. Dovahkiin, Dovahkiin Naal ok zin los vahriin Wah dein vokul mahfaeraak ahst vaal! Ahrk fin norok paal graan Fod nust hon zindro zaan Dovahkiin, fah hin kogaan mu draal! Huzrah nu, kul do od, wah aan bok lingrah vod Ahrk fin tey, boziik fun, do fin gein! Wo lost fron wah ney dov Ahrk fin reyliik do jul Voth aan suleyk wah ronit faal krein Ahrk fin kel lost prodah, Do ved viing ko fin krah, Tol fod zeymah win kein meyz fundein!