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Quality - very very poor. Many mistakes, misspellings and sometimes just plain wrong names. Updates - good frequency Development - meh, whats going on? All of the Triwizard cup in 4 short chapters. Where is the story, where is the content, whats going on and why are things happening as they are? Seems like author also doesn't know. Design - Taking JKRs cast and watered them down to 1D facsimiles Background - Its Harry Potter (for now), but you witness the world through the blurred passage of a speeding train.
Never seen the other novels with this type of system before but it seems interesting, that being said this feels way to rushed. it would have been better to dump the MC in Harry's body at an earlier stage and used that time to build up the background a bit more, it feels like your jumping off the deep end with your metaphorical legs bound in chains.
i had hope this novel has going to be a good.one but. man i am so disappointed. mc is naive. stupid etc. thats will make you quit this novel soon to soon. read chapter two and three you will know what i am talking about. i am dropping this stupid teen age novel. its good for those who are 12 year old or fpr those who don’t know why the world is gray.
Великалепная идея, но к сожалению сомнительная реализация. Я изначально надеяся что будет великолепное торжество магии технологии и техномигии в мире Гарри Поттера, да и с любимыми пейрингами, но автор страрательно спускает историю в унитах нелепыми гаремами и другими мирами Great idea, but unfortunately a dubious implementation. I originally hoped that there would be a magnificent triumph of the magic of technology and techno-magic in the world of Harry Potter, and with my favorite pairings, but the author passionately lowers the story in units with ridiculous harems and other worlds
English is okay but it feels like the characters don't have emotion they don't feel like they actually have proper conversations just feels like you're rushing it to where it's like a video game character without emotions like they just do something and they just do something like there's no conversation just feel like it's too bright or yeah just like there's no emotion like it wasn't a sentence like there was a conversation between actual people PS updating stability is two because I honestly did not know what to put it at
Seeing the celestial forge I was excited at first but the application of not only the forge abilities but the extreme use of cliches has killed my desire to read. This could have been a great read if done slightly differently. Grammar is understandable. The entire writing style is less a story and more of a diary entry or maybe a checklist, there is very little dialog that isn't cut into ''I explained this to that person' World building is stuffed so full of every cliche from every Harry Potter fanfic that it loses any charm.
Overall I felt the novel was very rushed, there was no world building only that Mac is in HP verse no development of characters. Basically my wakes up as Harry and for some reason uses a fallout type of system abandoning magic in a sense for technology. It’s not the best but if your bored and want something to numb your brain this is it. I equate it to Taco Bell and the explosive diarrhea you have afterwords
