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Starting in Harry Potter with the Celestial Forge
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Starting in Harry Potter with the Celestial Forge

Damon_Jager

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Read Starting in Harry Potter with the Celestial Forge fanfiction written by the author Damon_Jager on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Book&Literature fanfic stories, covering reincarnation, r18, system, harem, magic. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Waking up in the Body of Harry Potter with the Celestial forge was not what i was expecting on a Friday evening. This is really my first attempt to make any thing in fanfiction. So it will be trash as is my grammar so feel free to trash me as much as you want. Thank you reading. If you like the Celestial Forge system and how it works I recommend Celestial Mouse, Child of Iron, and The Ringing of a Forge of Stars. They have amazing writing and take place in cool settings they are all on QQ. Also this will suck I struggle with writting and I’m trying to improve and I’m just doing this for fun. Go read the previous listed for WAY better quality stuff.

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Sokanas
SokanasLv4Sokanas

Quality - very very poor. Many mistakes, misspellings and sometimes just plain wrong names. Updates - good frequency Development - meh, whats going on? All of the Triwizard cup in 4 short chapters. Where is the story, where is the content, whats going on and why are things happening as they are? Seems like author also doesn't know. Design - Taking JKRs cast and watered them down to 1D facsimiles Background - Its Harry Potter (for now), but you witness the world through the blurred passage of a speeding train.

Brezer
BrezerLv6Brezer

the story makes no sense. the forge does not fit with potter verse. just a waiste of time to read. only reason I am posting is to warn others off.

Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv4Darius_Chromwell

Never seen the other novels with this type of system before but it seems interesting, that being said this feels way to rushed. it would have been better to dump the MC in Harry's body at an earlier stage and used that time to build up the background a bit more, it feels like your jumping off the deep end with your metaphorical legs bound in chains.

UsernameNotFound
UsernameNotFoundLv1UsernameNotFound

Великалепная идея, но к сожалению сомнительная реализация. Я изначально надеяся что будет великолепное торжество магии технологии и техномигии в мире Гарри Поттера, да и с любимыми пейрингами, но автор страрательно спускает историю в унитах нелепыми гаремами и другими мирами Great idea, but unfortunately a dubious implementation. I originally hoped that there would be a magnificent triumph of the magic of technology and techno-magic in the world of Harry Potter, and with my favorite pairings, but the author passionately lowers the story in units with ridiculous harems and other worlds

Kirse
KirseLv4Kirse

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Blue_Bird_0758
Blue_Bird_0758Lv1Blue_Bird_0758

i had hope this novel has going to be a good.one but. man i am so disappointed. mc is naive. stupid etc. thats will make you quit this novel soon to soon. read chapter two and three you will know what i am talking about. i am dropping this stupid teen age novel. its good for those who are 12 year old or fpr those who don’t know why the world is gray.

trxs300
trxs300Lv5trxs300

I haven't read it but almost all celestial forge novels are good looking forward for how it turn out :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Fenrirthewolfgod
FenrirthewolfgodLv5Fenrirthewolfgod

English is okay but it feels like the characters don't have emotion they don't feel like they actually have proper conversations just feels like you're rushing it to where it's like a video game character without emotions like they just do something and they just do something like there's no conversation just feel like it's too bright or yeah just like there's no emotion like it wasn't a sentence like there was a conversation between actual people PS updating stability is two because I honestly did not know what to put it at

UsernameNotFound
UsernameNotFoundLv1UsernameNotFound

Reeeeli expect it to become big fanfic ------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------

Faithlesszealot
FaithlesszealotLv3Faithlesszealot

Seeing the celestial forge I was excited at first but the application of not only the forge abilities but the extreme use of cliches has killed my desire to read. This could have been a great read if done slightly differently. Grammar is understandable. The entire writing style is less a story and more of a diary entry or maybe a checklist, there is very little dialog that isn't cut into ''I explained this to that person' World building is stuffed so full of every cliche from every Harry Potter fanfic that it loses any charm.

Noname126
Noname126Lv2Noname126

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Diogo_Sanatna
Diogo_SanatnaLv4Diogo_Sanatna

this novel is amazing and i liked the quality of the writing, story development is great and the story itself is magic i hope the author continues with this wonderful work

Tyrfringr
TyrfringrLv6Tyrfringr

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Dragon150
Dragon150Lv5Dragon150

4⭐ for the honestly.🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱

Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv3Dao_of_Melancholy

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Vasiliy
VasiliyLv4Vasiliy

interesting

Redex933
Redex933Lv1Redex933

I have read this harfy potter fan fiction and I must say that it is not bad (I have reached the last chapter: 7) ... But I have encountered a problem: the author does not manage to organize the continuity of the plot well (I think it will time, from what I know and the first fan-fiction so it goes quite 👍) ... (not that I can do better) then author continues like this.

zoink
zoinkLv5zoink

really a good story have been waiting for some one to make someting like this please continue with it 10/10 :)......................................

Jarvin_Navas
Jarvin_NavasLv3Jarvin_Navas

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