Reviews of yerr

This novel tickles my funny bone. The dialogues are hilarious to the point even the father calls his children "brats" The chapter titles are sarcastic, such as "The Universe's Future Dumbass" which I like because it grabs my attention. The typos are minimal, and as for the grammar, I have no right to judge it because I'm extremely bad at it as well, trust me. Stability of Updates is an automatic five for me. As for the character design, it is quite decent but I feel like the author could describe the characters more so readers like me could have a better time portraying them. There are four chapters so far, so deciding on whether the story is smooth or fast-paced seems like a hard decision. This is all I could think of, nothing much to criticize about. I'd suggest that you keep the story funny, since for me, it is. Hilarious dialogues from time to time could really attract the reader's attention. All in all, I will still rate this novel five stars. (I'm not that strict) I also recommend this novel to everyone in Webnovel. It is not boring nor is it lackluster. It has the blend of comedy and fiction that will surely tickle your funny bone, that's if you're a fan of comedy of course.

Stumbled upon this story, and I gotta say, it's not bad. The characters here are funny and awesome (except Haljin, HUGE dickhead). I gave 3 stars for the world background because it hasn't been fleshed out yet, but I have confidence that you can do it :). There are some grammar mistakes spread out in this story, but it doesn't affect the story too much. I love simple, light-hearted stories, and I hope you don't drop this one. Good luck, author!

Here's your second review! Author keep up the good work! I really like the pace and the comedic scenes, It was hilarious! There are some grammatical errors but it can be corrected by Grammarly. I hope you also review mine called Lumia: Other World