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Your writing really needs more polishing. Instead of rushing through the day, you should spend more time on describing the present: who is doing what. In addition, it should be "82th Platoon" and not "platoon 82". Or the armed forces in Starship trooper is structured differently from present day. So when someone is in Mobile Infantry, he is in the army. Please check your work again.