Reviews of Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System
Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System
ForceFromBeyond
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- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
well this has great grammar the story so far is great good character building perfect world building and background just hope you didnt drop this cuz we all love this very much ill give you all my daily stones in hope of your return
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honestly, i´m a little bit disapointed about the mc. he has been in this world for some time but he NEVER opened the starter pack which is mean to be used to HELP the mc in this new world. from the little that i have readen, he never explored or exploited fully is system, not even a little bit. he doesn’t know how to obtain points, he joined the jedi as a youngling and tell them the future but they ignore him (i do dislike the jedi as they are a little bit stupid and extremely narow minded but this story made me believe they were even more stupid and narrow minded than i though). i will stop my rant here but i was a bit saddened by the beginning of the story with a mc who waste his whole potential. i mean if he had no system that’s okay but having one and not using it, i just find it plain stupid
This fanfic is very good. It wasn't exactly what I was expecting, but it's close enough. The writing style is very good, especially compared to other fanfics on this app, and the timeline that the MC was reborn into is rare for a fanfic (between Episode 3 & 4). There are really only a couple criticisms to make. The first is the update stability, which is not really good: only 20 chapters in 6 months. Though that seems to be improving. The second is that the MC gets things handed to him too easily imo. I mean he's granted these blindly loyal subordinates that pop into thin air on a whim, no training or build-up required. Moreover, apparently the MC even has the option to create entire planets out of nothing. To be honest, while I expected some creation and spawning, since it's in the title, I didn't expect it to be as bluntly OP as it is. Right now the Mc doesn't really have to put in any effort at all if he doesn't want to. He could just spawn blindly loyal, sentient subordinates, sit back, and let them rack up the points for him, allowing him to purchase more, and so on. It doesn't really make for an entertaining story in my opinion, but to each their own. I'm sure that many people find that sort of OPness enjoyable to read.
Incredible grammar, very good character development, the story has coherence and is not rushed, the author knew how to handle the initial part (children of the MC) and now he is beginning to get involved in the chaos of war but here I give him 1 star in updates. Because the author does not warn if he is going to continue or it will be just a pause, he has us abandoned
i overall think this is a great story in the star wars universe the characters are good and in character the mc is a good guy but i hope we see him master the dark side and its power aswell,and maybe have him make his own version of the jedi that uses both sides to help defeat palpatines empire and maybe other stuff depending on the continuity.Things could be improved but overall a very good story and it is a shame it is not got a rating yet but that will come in time. I hope this is not dropped and that the author continues to improve and and make the mc have some challenges in life and to give the mc a concrete long term goal like immortality or something of that nature to strive for anyway that is about everything i feel needed to be said. And if the author is reading this don't let negative reviews get you down or upset you most are trolls and you can't please everyone but you don't have to.
