Reviews of Star Wars: Silver Angel

I'm not even trying to be harsh cause I usually love StarWars fics but this has to be one of the worst starts I have seen to one. Its rly turned me off from reading more. Very generic start with saving a kid from getting run over... like pls some creativity? The whole thing where the mc is a game character etc rly just doesn't meld well with star wars for me. Idk like there is rly only one power in star wars which is the force. As long as your strong in that then your op... dunno they just don't fit well together for me. Would have loved to see him learning about the force, exploring it and just good old training. I mean that is like half of what StarWars is. If you take away that with the game character you're like cutting StarWars in half. I love the fact that he wasn't fully human and is half of a race I have never seen before. Added something new that I liked. But then the pricing of the powers are so fcking stupid. Like one with the force, something that will make him op af in the force is 500,000 and then a skill to control tech is 700,000. Like are you mad? Are you forgetting that the force is the base of everything in Starwars? It's in everything and binds everything together etc. Plus he can always eventually learn it by training so why waste the points? Also, the other things that should have been priced more where cheap af. Just the price of everything was messed up tbh. The tech thing was totally unaided rly. No reason for it. Also didn't like that he didn't change his name. Idk James just doesn't fit in with StarWars... it's just such a boring name. (not trying to be mean to anyone) Just for a story, you want it to be special. Then the decision that is the hight of stupidity where he overspent his karma and will now face some rly bad sht/event to make up for it. Like are you acc that stupid? Why tf are you risking something like that? You could be blind, deaf, a slave etc the list goes on. So dumb xD All the points were wasted on that stupid tech thing... I mean you have the force. You can learn it eventually or just when your strong enough grab ships outta the sky. oh, also hate the fact that the mc is immortal. Like how fcking op is that and he gets it for nothing. It's a joke rly... Then also game character stories never last long or are that interesting cause he will already be op af in like 10 chapters... ahhh gl to the author but yeah.

did you forget your old account password because this seems to similar to Star wars: Eternal. or did you at least get permission from old author to continue. I don't really mind I'm just glad it's up and running again.

This is like promising someone to cook them a better meal and then projectile vomiting over the shit meal, then saying, here you go, a better meal! Its a near complete copy of another piece of trash fanfic on this site. With minor changes to make the character an even more passive, submissive, degenerate *** slave wannabe. I dont mind fanfics of fanfics, but if you do it atleast change it drastically enough to make it your own or add on to it. For example, i buy pizzas mozerella pizza in the store, then add my own favorite topings, add bbq sause, oregano, some prosciutto or other type of meat I like, then some dried onions and voila. Thats making a pizza your own. Vomitting over the store bought product is not.

this story is remarkably similar to Star Wars: Eternal fanfic, different enough I guess. different name same species same powers mechu-duru same starting world

80%+ is a blatant copy of another story. Except for some retaded choices during character creation, that made the MC impossible to respect. Not even cartoon characters are so stupid on average... Real disappointment. I was hoping to read about someone cleaning up the original story(which had a nice premise). But instead, I come to find someone taking a wet shit over it.

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading This book so keep writing this book So I’ll be able to read thank you🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

I am thoroughly enjoying this Fic. Please keep up the good work. I have a question though. Since he transmigrated he will have to lie about his origins, but most jedi knights and higher can perceive lies through the force. Now I'm not being petty just using my knowledge on the story. I just would like to know what you plan to do, or if you are going to just let it slide. I'm down for either just asking.

Great start I hope you pick it up again and soon. This is a book I'd be willing pay for advanced chapters on patreon. So don't waste your talent in writing.

I wish this story continues. its pretty interesting to see. there aren't a lot of enjoyable stat wars gamers and this o e I truly enjoyed. its just hit all thr right spots you want from a star wars story.

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It’s really good it’s just that he doesn’t right it anymore,so I was trying to find away to ask him if he can continue and if author sees this is there away for you to continue writing this

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Holy good story batman, I was not expecting this amount of awesome. i very rarely leave reviews but this has to be the best star-wars story I have read. I only have one issue.... Qui-Gon Jinn not Gui-Gon Jinn. love the story can not wait for more.

I like it a lot please dont stop My only conpliant is that you dont update fastTer. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👏👏

Guys you have to remember there’s only 27 chapters of Star Wars eternal if this goes beyond that and it stays about the same quality that’s out now then even if the first 27 chapters were copied we’re getting a new fresh fanfic Obviously it would be bad if he copied at all But you know also he might not be copping and they might just have very very similar stories sometimes somebody can read some thing put it in the back of their mind and decide to write something and unintentionally write down something that was in the novel that they read or they just straight up copy and pasted changed a few words around and posted it could be that I don’t know

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Not too bad but it seems to be a copy of another fan fiction. doesn't matter though I just wish the system didn't have an inventory or shop, these elements just seem to ruin the story, the character doesn't have to try hard at all to earn anything and can just store whatever he wants.

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So I like the story a lot so far the only reason I’m not rating it higher is because the begging and his race is very similar to another story on here but they are diverging quite a bit at this point. I truly hope you keep going and improving the story your doing a great job.

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