ObsidianOrbs
It started really good I thought I found another good novel but till now iam still waiting for the so called powerful couple to strike but … nothing You hve all ingredients with evil people but it’ just so silly I hve to say I skipped some chapters right iam almost at 300 but still no retaliation from the main lead plus too many characters for what purpose ? ! Anyway I don’t know if I will reading it as there are so many novels to check out
"My name is Denn. I'm an editor. I've read the initial chapters of your novel and I feel that it showcases your capabilities as a writer thus, I would like to invite you to discuss publishing your work on our platform. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, feel free to reach out at denneditor@gmail.com. A brief introduction, and link of work will be appreciated when you send a message. Looking forward to hear from you! :-)
This novel is fantastic! From the very first chapter, it directly immerses you. The characters are just amazing and so is the writing. At first, I intended to give the lovely author some positive and negative points to help them improve but I simply do not know how to further improve this, I'll keep reading this for sure!
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤
The novel started well The writing style of the author is good , But then what's so different about this every character has same old character design. same old CEO ml whose features are damn similar other MLs and same emperor like character too hats off I had many hopes Ps. Reading too many novels only make u roll your eye over the similarities of plot with other novel and make you crave for difference 😅( I think it's just for me coz neither new or old readers nor the novel loving MC who has many fantasies will agree with me)
Starting with a good synopsis, and then a romance story with twist and turns. It was a good ride. The author also wrote this story in a unique way. He/she separate all of the sentences and write it without paragraph ( I understand because most of it was dialogue and you need to separate it), which is quite new to me. I personally, would love to have more narrative so that I could know more about the surroundings set up, but so far its already enough. It was enjoyable.