neonlover_1
Yo readers, A shameless author here to promote her novel. As a beginner and a person whose first language is not English, I am trying my best to convey the feelings of the characters to you and make them realistic. I will be honest. So the book has slow romance, as I think that a person in character or in real lives cannot fell in love in just a single meeting. Also as the synopsis is, I myself as a reader felt that it had mystery in it. The book has romance as well as mystery. So, please give it a try and witness the growing understanding between MCs.
We all read different romance novels and most of them have the same concepts but still they are few who stands out from the this crowd. And this is a part of those who will grab your attention from the very first chapter. The best thing that I like is the mystery on which the whole book is based on. I am an avid reader of romantic novels but I too get boring if it is only about romance. And this books helps me to keep my interest alive. We don't understand a story after reading only few chaps we need patience to complete a story. And that's why it gives this plus point too.
This story is amazing... The characters , background, emotions everything is written every beautifully so that the reader could easily understand it rather than thinking and solving it like Rubik's cube... Readers can enjoy it easily and it portrays everything about the characters and background in details I recommend to join this journey of the spring lovers with love, mysteries and action too ππ
This is a nice story if I say so, Mr. Author. There aren't many mistakes grammatically or otherwise that I can point out. From a beginner's point of view, like me, It's pretty much wholesome and well-written. What I do can share with you is some advice like reviewing the first few chapters and going through Grammarly if you have some problems with grammar. I was suggested to use this app and it's holding pretty well for me. So, if you haven't I suggest you do. Btw, keep publishing and happy writing!
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What can I say, nice book. Synopsis is nice bit not that catchy, your bestir might want to work on it if you hope to enthrall readers and get their attention. Nice cover page by the way. Writing quality is good, my only problem would be the large block of text per paragraph. Update stability is great, character design, world back, story development am great. For a first time writing, you sure did a good job here author. I'm interested in seeing how this story plays out, So like few books I reviewed, i'm gonna add this to my library and read on, wud recommend this to my younger sis. I know she'd love it, but you would have to give her updates or she wud nag at me. I'm curious though, what this heirloom and abilities and dream is all about. That, your bestie did good justice to at d synopsis level. All in all nice work guys. Keep it up.
Interesting story and characters. Nice building up of ******* thought the negligence of the doctors is a bit scary. Thank god real life isn't that bad. On the other hand the character interactions are nice and from what i have seem of the female lead's personality till now. She is a pretty strong and upbeat person.
A solid premise, standard fare in Chinese novels centered towards a female audience, the writing is a bit rough around the edges but acceptable, the plot from where I have read to is still in its infant stages, It has potential but needs to be developed, into a hopefully unique manner. Im a guy if you couldn't tell but I'm omnivorous in my consumption of all literature, some suggestions would be to read novels such as (Genius Doctor: Black Belly Miss), (7th young Miss) (The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss) and (Mesmerizing Ghost Doctor) some of my favorites and learn from them and develop an even more amazing story.
First of all, I like the wang yu yan and I could relate to her so well in the first chapter since I felt that too. Those overnight shifts (BIG OOF!! XD). The story is great so far even if there is a minor of grammatical errors. All in all is it great and I cant wait to read more for the chemistry between the two characters
It's a nice story! From what I understood it's a book written by two authors, right? Which, in my opinion, is more difficult to create, so you both did a really good job. Some advise I might give you is once you finish the book, put it aside for a bit and then check if there are some grammar mistakes, however don't worry about it too much while you're editing your first or second draft. Remember that the more you write and read, the more you grow as a writer. Keep writing! β€οΈ
I like the story and went on to read 8 chapters. It is a nice romance story with a hospital setting. The plot seems interesting plot. World background is excellently described. Character design is equally great. Stability of updates is good too. The story is developing nicely. Writing quality is good too. There are a few grammatical errors. I would suggest that you run the written chapter in draft stage, through an online grammar checker. It will take care of the spellings, the punctuation etc. I am also using it. All the best Authors! I am saying authors as there are two people writing this novel.