Spreading music in another world

Lucien was a prodigy singer, it was said that his singing voice could reach the soul of anyone, that there was no one's heart he couldn't touch. And it was truth, however he didn't have much to live because of cancer. When he had 1 week left, it was like the final hour before sunset, the final burst of energy. He strangely didn't feel sick like he was before this timeframe. On his last concern almost all of the world were watching he performance live, The elites of the world bought tickets for enormous price to be next to this dying legend. But when the performance finally commenced everyone were taken aback, even if they were used to his godly performances this was next level. Infact his singing that day reached even the goddess that watched over the earth. When the time for him to die came, she took his soul to her domain and disccused a way out for him, reincarnation with few advantages, restriction that made him despair and a new hope for life. english is not my first language so please point out any mistakes I make