53 vote for fic remake
hello all, I'm back
I've just gotten wlden ring and I've been min maxing the hell out of it in the last 2 weeks that is why I haven't updated in my other fics for the last few weeks, sorry bout that if u do read them.
I have recently looked at how open my schedule is since I have begun making advanced chapters on my fics and I have come up with 3 ideas for the story.
1 - continue with the remake 1st chapter I made of mc being reincarnated with Witcher 3 Higher Vampire powers and Ciri as love interest
2 - Mc is reborn as Knight Artorias pre Dragon War, as in just before the war with Ancient Dragons begins and when the race of Human were created along with the founding of Anor Londo in its beginning years as the God's begins building up their Armies in preparation to fight the Dragons.
3 - Mc is born into Elden Ring, the Lands Between sometime around the time of the Great Tree, as in waaay before the Elden Ring crashes into the Lands Between and before it begins being a parasite of the Great Tree. mc will then learn magic primary as he is a 9 tail fox and will meet and teach Empyreon body Ranni as she is as a child or in teen years and meets the Snow Witch Renna.
quick lore of Elden Ring since it really isn't spoilers since this is before game events and I will not say anything that may be spoilers, like a certain fire guy with 40,000 health.
Ranni, Malenia and Miquella are Empyreons, (I won't say what that is but basically they OP with OP potential of a GOD.)
there was Queen Marika off the Lands Between and ruled it before the Elden Ring crashes in the landmass
the Erdtree sprouts from the ground as a result of the Elden Ring being a parasite feeding of the Great Tree (the dead tree u see in Deeproot Depths).
worship of the Erdtree is formed called the Golden Order faith
the Elden Ring is a sort of Avatar that the Greater Will (a Outer God that uses the Elden Ring, and the 2 Fingers to direct its will)
the Greater Will via the 2 Fingers gives Marika Empyreon status and power alongside a "Shadow" nammed Maliketh.
a Shadow is basically an absolutely loyal and obedient subordinate of the Empyreon individual.
a Shadow actually has a secrat purpose, kinda like a program in their being, basically should the Empyreon try to rebel in very damaging ways to the Greater Will, the Shadow will, against its will, attempt to eliminate the Empyreon in question.
Marika marries a warrior called Horah Loux for various reasons
Marika has a war waged against the Fire Giants and their Fell God since they posses a threat to the Erdtree and can destroy it with their flames of their forge.
Horah Loux was more of a Barbarian and savage warrior so Marika gave Serosh (a magical lion asura phantom of sorts) to bond with Horah Loux so that he can be more civilised and in control of himself thalen being a savage warrior, but is now a warrior and ruler of a kingdom.
he is now named as Godrey, the First Elden Lord and had few children with Marika.
the confirmed ones are Mohg and Morgott (I'm still looking into the lore of their family tree so Nepheli is not mentiones as I'm not sure on her yet but I think she is his daighter from a previous wife or after the leaving Lands Between before game events.)
the both of them are born with deformities, these deformed beings are called Omens and the two of them were spared as they had royal blood but were sent to a dungeon below the city in the sewers and were chained up like monsters.
there was a 3rd child called Godwyn and is a major figure. he was born with normal Human appearance.
Mohg suffered and resented everything that isn't a Omen and the Faceless Mother (or Formless Mother or Blood God (basically an Outer God)) [I don't know exact name yet], contacted Mohg and Mohg swore his loyalty and faith to the God and gained power from it.
he escaped and would create Mohgwyn palace and a Cult region of Blood practice.
Morgott still was tortured but Godfrey was the only one that cared for Morgitt and still saw him as his son, while everyone else didn't and inoy viewed him as a monster. (I love Morgott's character, its just sad, though the jellyfish sister's are way sadder.)
don't know when, but a large dragon called Gransax attacked Lendyll (Marika's kindoms capital city just next to the Erdtree) and destroyed its walls for the first and only time in history.
Gransax is killed and by the efforts of Godwyn
the Dragon War starts (they copied this straight from Dark Souls LoL)
Gidwyn fights but then spares and befriends a Dragon called Fortisax.
Forisax's sister called Lansax took human form and taught humans lots if Dragon spells.
Godwyn made a region to worship the dragons which didn't conflict with Goden Order faith of worshiping the Erdtree and thus peacefully coexist with one another.
He is now called Godwyn the Golden
a mage queen called Renalla fights against the Golden Order's Armies as they try to invade Liurnia but fail in a draw multiple times.
Renalla falls in love with a warrior called Radagon and makes peace with hoth sides.
has children called Rykard, Radahn and Ranni.
Ranni is a bit complicated as she is born only of Radagon and doesn't have an actual biological mother like the others.
I don't know when she was born but had to have been during the time she was still at Raya Lucaria and the Carion mannor
Ranni is born of Radagon who used the Rune of the Unborn to birth Ranni.
this cause Ranni to be born as an Empyreon with ref hair.
yes she has red hair and only 3 arms, nit the Ranni u meet in the game. that is a fake doll body She made in the appearance of Renna.
(fanart image of Ranni in her Empyreon body (real Ranni body))
the children grow up
Radahn preferred to learn ways of a warrior but since he is Renalla's child who is a mage, he still learnt magic and thus he chose to learn Hravity Magic and learnt it from a Onyx Lord
Renalla tells Ranni of the moon power concept and has Ranni undergo a trial. Ranni discovers that her trial is of the Dark Moon which is of filled with "Mystery".
Ranni meets a four armed blue skinned witch called Renna the Snow Witch while she was wandering the woods one day.
Renna became Ranni's secrat tutor and warns Ranni to respect but also far the Dark Moon.
Radagon divorces Renalla and takes all 3 children with him and returns to the Golden Order, but leaves Renalla with a gift.
a Amber orb/egg of some kind which houses the Rune of the Unborn within it.
Rennalla loses her sanity and is obsessed with the Amber Egg.
her kingdom enters civil war between two factions
Radahn admires Godfrey as his idol
time skip
Radagon and Marika marry each other and have 3 Empyreon children called
Melina, the Gloam Eyed Queen
Malenia (who will be called Malenia, Blade of Miquella one day) she is Twin of Miquella but is born with a affliction called the Scarlet Rot that erodes her from the inside
Miquella has a affliction where he is basically a Shota with Eternal Youth, with Eternal Childhood.
Miquella makes countless revolutionary and incredible achievements all I'm an attempt to help cure Malenia of her Scarlet Rot.
he creates the Haligtree (imitation of Erdtree using his own blood) which helps in holding back the Scarlet Rot with Malenia
he also creates Unallowed Gold and the Unallowed Gold Needle which is capable of preventing Outer God interference (this is OP AF)
(ps, if u accidentally get the Frenzy Flame then u will be forced to do the Frenzy Flame Ending by default. there is a misunderstanding with everyone that u need to do Millicent's and Shibri's questline in order to get the Frenzy Flame Edning unlocked. this is absolutely 0% true. I legit just ran to the Frenzy Flame and grabbed it without even going to roundtable hold or talking to anyone at all except Patches so I get access to his inventory. however, if u want to cancel the Frenzy Flame ending and do another one or the default game ending then u will need to do Millicent's questline to get Miquella's Unallowed Gold Needle at the end of her quest at the Haligtree where the Putrid Tree Spirit resides. Once u have the Needle, go to Placidusax arena (note that this is an end game optional boss of the final area of the game), once inside go to ur Inventory and "use" the Gold Needle. this will activate it and u can now avoid the Frenzy Flame ending.)
back to lore
Marika discovers a secrat of the Elden Ring and begins to doubt the Golden Order doctrine she created at the order of the Greater Will via the 2 Fingers.
Marika sends Godfrey and many of his warriors to a place not of the Lands Between and gives them an mission. to wage a war so that they can become strong and will one day return but as Tarnished.
Radagon and Marika marry at this point and have the children mentioned earlier once Godfrey leaves
Radagon has a sculptor make a statue of him in Leyndell
the sculptur discovers a hidden secrat in Radagon's wardrobe and discovers that Radagon and Marika are actually one being, 2 sides of the same coin.
he secretly make it so if u use the Law of Regression spell in front of the statue, the statue of Radagon will transform into a statue of Marika
Melina is the Gloam Eyed Queen and rules the Godskin Apostle Cult, and weilds Destined Death
Marika had Maliketh defeat, kill and take Destined Death from Melina
Marika removes the concept of death from the Lands Between (this even more OP!!!), this is why the Remeberances and the Spirit Ashes exist in the game
Ranni also discovers what the Elden Ring truly is and the Greater Will and the 2 Fingers
(ps, at a completely unknown time in the timeline, a city called Nokron, Eternal City had created the Fingerslayer Blade that can kill the 2 Fingers permanently thus cutting of the Greater Will's influence of the world. they were destroyed by Astel, Naturalborn of the Void when it crashed into their city. rip!)
Ranni makes a plan and steals a Fragment of the Rune of Death (Destined Death) from Maliketh, the Blake Blade.
Maliketh fuses the Rune of Death into his own flesh and blade so that no one can ever steal it ever again.
Ranni uses this faegment and creates weapons with Destined Death's power within it and makes a organisation of individuals called Black Knife Assasins
Ranni had them kidnap Godwyn the Golden
Ranni engraves one half of the Cursemark/Rune of Death on Godwyn's back and the ither half on her own
she kills herself used a Balck Blade and the Black Knife Assasins kill Gidwyn using their own blades
this is known as the Night of the Black Knives, u know the guys in the intro cutscene that was killing a guy with a lark mark on his back with a knife, yeah, that is Godwyn being killed.
what Ranni actually did was destroy her physical body and had Godwyn's spiritual self be destroyed
Ranni possessed a doll body She had created which resembles her teacher Renna, thus she is as she looks in game.
her real body lies at the top of the Tower of Liurnia and u can clearly see the cursemark on her back and her red hair on the decomposing corpse
the Rune of Death basically erases a being from existance, but Ranni found a loophole and only destroyed her body with half of ut and Godwyn was the other half but his soul/spirit is destroyed.
Ranni did this so she can break free from her Emyreon flesh which is linked to the 2 Fingers and the Greater Will essentially making her a slave to them just as Marika is along with the Golden Order
Marika soon after this causes the Shattering of the Elden Ring and had disappeared
a war amongst all the other demi gods occurs
Radahn uses his gravity magic to freeze the stars in place and also Ranni's specific 2 Fingers was also held up in space
Ranni wants to find the Fingerslayer Blade and use it to kill her specific 2 Fingers but can't because of what Radahn had done, she is now a prisoner of a destiny she can't hope to break
ps, Melina is revived somehow cause of what Ranni did with the Cursemark of Death, go watch a video explaining that cause it is to complicated to explain how and why this is possible. Ranni's face has a spectral face of Melina overlapping with her doll body face as a result.
all the Demi Gods fight
Malenia and Radahn fight to a draw
Malenia used Scarlet Rot to basically Nuke all of Caelid into a Scarlet Rot wasteland
Finnely is a GOAT and literally carried an unconscious Malenia on her back all the way from Caelid into Limgrave to Liurnia, into Atlas Platau, then to Mt Gelmir and to the Haligtree by her damn self.
that is why Finnely is the GOAT!
during the time Malenia was fighting Radahn, Mohg tricked and kidnapped Miquella from the Haligtree and took him to Moghwyn Palace
events happen and Godfrey alongside his Tarnished returns to the Lands Between buy only a certain few are real Tarnsihed that are blessed with Grace of Gold
u the player are one of them.
game start
lore end
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that was alot, anyway, option 3 will be my mc as 9 tail fox and will meet Ranni before Renna and he becomes her teacher instead.
option 2 is mc as Artorias but he will eventually go to Lands Between before Shattering events
option 3 might be a Harem story, also do note I hate Harem story but Elden Ring has some that are simply worth it or I can't decide
Harem members or romance partners for vote for option 3 story choice
1 - Ranni, the Lunar Princess (Empyreon body, red hair body)
2 - Renna, the Snow Witch
3 - Malenia, Blade of Miquella
4 - Queen Marika, the Eternal
5 - Mc Girlfriend from Earth before Reincarnation and will transmigrate into one of the bodies of the following characters above or just as new OC
