Reviews of Solo leveling crossover to attack of titan/book moved here to fanfic

Bro you have good thing going in here, the grammar is not as much of the problem as the dialog. I have no idea who is sayig what and have to think about it a lot. it has potential so its pitty it has bad quality

I think that this has some amazing potential and the only problem i have is sometimes it is hard to tell if someone is talking pr thinking other than that though keep it up cant wait for more.

Grammar issues/spelling mistakes/Quotations etc... makes the thing pretty off putting. however, if fixed it would be a great story. I would suggest a little extra time on cleaning it up.

I love the idea there is not a lot of novels about solo leveling so keep it up I will support you .......................................

This is an interesting idea. If only for the fact that JIN-WOO is in the story. But it's almost impossible to read. I can't tell who's talking, what's happening most of the time and the writing... If you rewrite this and fix the spelling errors I'll change my review but right now. No fix this mess.

this is good but a lot of this is cringe ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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